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The Belly Dancer

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Poet deVine
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Beguiling belly, swaying hips,
hands held high above her head
face covered but for innocent eyes
drawing you to her dancerís bed.

Body swaying to the music
enticing thoughts, most lewd.
Seducing your heart with a ripple,
of her bellyís attitude.

Lowering herself before you
offering fantasies in her dance
fingers drawing you closer
to join her in romance.

Then with a touch, itís over
your wife just broke the spell.
You turn and smile and hope
she wonít give you hell.


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1 posted 02-17-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Poet~ LOL! This is really great! How fun. As long as he wasn't touching her, he'll be fine!  -SEA
devina
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2 posted 02-17-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

LOL@ you Sharon...the ending was great!!! You started out all seductive and enticing...then BAM...in pops the wife!!! Very cute!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Rex Allen McCoy
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You have a great sense of humour ...  
My wife would have woke me with a touch that sorta stings for a while

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

Wizzard
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4 posted 02-17-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

DANG!!!
I was doing sooo good with a visual until the part about the wife  
Nice visual...well to a point.
Any visual is a good visual,heck Im into peep show`s
Thank`s PoetdeVine for the brief Visual  


†Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.



[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-17-2000).]
bobbycat
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5 posted 02-17-2000 09:51 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Great job!!!!  LOL Thanks for the laugh!!!     

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
Alwye
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LOL, great!  Thanks for the laugh!

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

WhtDove
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LOL!!!  I didn't expect that twist on the end though!  We'd give em hell too wouldn't we?

 <*\\\><

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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8 posted 02-17-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Poet deVine,
You wrote a picture that drew me in
And then hit me in the head with the sin.
You little devil. *L* Sy PS. Great poem.
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9 posted 02-17-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great Sharon!! What an ending!! Perfect!!

Denise
Wolfgang
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My Heart had been seduced so much it nearly stopped working!
Do you mind if I just sit out the next performance?
I need to getup to speed again!
Marilyn
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11 posted 02-17-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

LOL..Great job Sharon!!
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12 posted 02-17-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Got me on this one, DeVine one! Great constuction and ending  
January Flowers
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13 posted 02-17-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

HAHAHA!
Gee, I think I've been one of those
women before...

Thanks for the giggle.
JamesMichael
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14 posted 02-18-2000 05:57 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Poet Devine this is nicely written.  I love belly dancers...definately one of the finer blessings in this life.   James
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15 posted 02-18-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

OUCH!!! OUCH!!! OUCH!!!
My wonderful wife
woulda smacked my mouth!!

I asked her why once
she wouldn't let me look
She said, "Would that tramp,
Want to come home and cook?"

So I look no further
Than here by my side
because Im tired of the bruises
She puts on my hide.

Wonderful Read Poet.
I loved it.

Chris.


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
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on the threshold of a dream


16 posted 02-18-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I have to admit I was questioning the "innocent eyes" with a "harumph" and a "yeah, right!" *G* But I love this, PDV... well done!
 
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