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The Belly Dancer
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The Belly Dancer |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beguiling belly, swaying hips, hands held high above her head face covered but for innocent eyes drawing you to her dancer’s bed. Body swaying to the music enticing thoughts, most lewd. Seducing your heart with a ripple, of her belly’s attitude. Lowering herself before you offering fantasies in her dance fingers drawing you closer to join her in romance. Then with a touch, it’s over your wife just broke the spell. You turn and smile and hope she won’t give you hell. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poet~ LOL! This is really great! How fun. As long as he wasn't touching her, he'll be fine!  -SEA |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
LOL@ you Sharon...the ending was great!!! You started out all seductive and enticing...then BAM...in pops the wife!!! Very cute!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You have a great sense of humour ...  My wife would have woke me with a touch that sorta stings for a while Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
DANG!!! I was doing sooo good with a visual until the part about the wife  Nice visual...well to a point. Any visual is a good visual,heck Im into peep show`s Thank`s PoetdeVine for the brief Visual  < !signature--> Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Great job!!!! LOL Thanks for the laugh!!! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
LOL, great! Thanks for the laugh! *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL!!! I didn't expect that twist on the end though! We'd give em hell too wouldn't we? <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, You wrote a picture that drew me in And then hit me in the head with the sin. You little devil. *L* Sy PS. Great poem. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Sharon!! What an ending!! Perfect!! Denise |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
My Heart had been seduced so much it nearly stopped working! Do you mind if I just sit out the next performance? I need to getup to speed again! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
LOL..Great job Sharon!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Got me on this one, DeVine one! Great constuction and ending |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
HAHAHA! Gee, I think I've been one of those women before...  Thanks for the giggle. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Poet Devine this is nicely written. I love belly dancers...definately one of the finer blessings in this life. James |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
OUCH!!! OUCH!!! OUCH!!! My wonderful wife woulda smacked my mouth!! I asked her why once she wouldn't let me look She said, "Would that tramp, Want to come home and cook?" So I look no further Than here by my side because Im tired of the bruises She puts on my hide. Wonderful Read Poet. I loved it. Chris. Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have to admit I was questioning the "innocent eyes" with a "harumph" and a "yeah, right!" *G* But I love this, PDV... well done! |
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