How many days, I can count , How many ways, I've to try, How many days, I've to stay, How many ways, I've to try, And put my heart in happines, How many ways, I've to think I CAN DO IT, How many days, I've to cry, How many ways, I've to try, How many days, I've to think I'm fine, How many days,
Usually poems that leave me hanging bug me a little to what the author wanted to say, but in this poem, it was almost needed. No need for an explanation. How many days, I think I know the filling rhyme.
I kinda agree with Joy 14 here. I liked the style you used, even though clarity of meaning is vague (maybe on purpose). "How many days", should not be counted by number but by content, I think! Nice work! Danny
I might be wrong but are you trying to say that you are in a relationship that just might not be what you want and that you are trying to find enough reasons to stay? Weather I understood it or not I liked it very much thank you,
Member Rara Avis
Wizzzard,Thank you for your comment. Joy,you too,thanks a lot Cerently,You're right,It's about a relationship poem. Liz,As always you make my poems so warm.Thank you.No,liz,I don't have any man yet,Yes I did create a man for my poems. THANK YOU Thank you all And of cousre speical thanks to danny,Wo always reads my poems.
[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-20-2000).]