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How many days

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vandana
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0 posted 02-17-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


How many days,
     I can count ,
How many ways,
    I've to try,
How many days,
     I've to stay,
  How many ways,
     I've to try,
And put my heart in happines,
    How many ways,
I've to think I CAN DO IT,
  How many days,
     I've to cry,
How many ways,
     I've to try,
How many days,
  I've to think I'm fine,
How many days,
    
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Wizzard
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1 posted 02-17-2000 07:14 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Vandana,
Im not sure how to reply to this one but I didn`t wanna let it go without letting you know that I took the time to read
You keep writing and I`ll keep reading
Wizz

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

JOY 14
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2 posted 02-17-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Usually poems that leave me hanging bug me a little to what the author wanted to say, but in this poem, it was almost needed.  No need for an explanation.  How many days,
I think I know the filling rhyme.

Joy
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 02-18-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I kinda agree with Joy 14 here. I liked the style you used, even though clarity of meaning is vague (maybe on purpose).
"How many days", should not be counted by number but by content, I think!
Nice work!
Danny
Cerenity
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4 posted 02-20-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Vandana,

I might be wrong but are you trying to say that you are in a relationship that just might not be what you want and that you are trying to find enough reasons to stay?
Weather I understood it or not I liked it very much thank you,

Cerenity-1
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 02-20-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hi, Vandana,Enjoyed your poem
Many of your poems are about an elusive love, and I am waiting for a happy one. Are they all about the same man?, or have you just created him?
Liz
vandana
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6 posted 02-20-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Wizzzard,Thank you for your comment.  
Joy,you too,thanks a lot  
Cerently,You're right,It's about a relationship poem.  Liz,As always you make my poems so warm.Thank you.No,liz,I don't have any man yet,Yes I did create a man for my poems.  THANK YOU  Thank you all  And of cousre speical thanks to danny,Wo always reads my poems.

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