navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » amnesia
Open Poetry #6
Post A Reply Post New Topic amnesia Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
infinat3 sadn3ss
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 85
somerset england

0 posted 2000-02-17 04:42 PM


Stupidly i tell ,
Not knowing the reason .
She knows ,
I see that .
So bad is my memory ,
I have forgotten what happened ,
the last time .
I try to put her into the back of my mind ,
but ,
i am overwhelmed by the beauty ,
That she beholds like a mother withchild .


         mike cable

© Copyright 2000 mike cable - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-02-19 09:02 PM


Mike C~
I must have suffered a mild dose of "Amnesia'
in letting this slip by.
Nicely done.
I'm sending it to the top for another look.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Brent Hotchkin
Junior Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 42
Florida,USA
2 posted 2000-02-19 10:56 PM


Excelent. Well captured. Must look for more of your infinite sadness.
mete out
Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270
england
3 posted 2000-03-02 06:43 AM


Cabes!
I had no idea that I hadn't posted to this one...
Your words keep getting better and better.
You are truely inspirational to me.
Keep it up!
All my love,
Your best mate.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #6 » amnesia

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary