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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-02-17 04:29 PM


This was written for my Mom and my best friend, Roberta.


*MY FAITHFUL FRIEND*

My friend is not perfect,
nor am I.
We'll spread our wings
and together we'll fly.
We'll soar through the meadows,
and up through the trees.
We'll fly together,
on a cool summer breeze.
We'll climb the highest mountain,
swim the deepest sea.
Together,
my faithful friend and me.

By Melissa Honeybee


© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

1 posted 2000-02-17 04:58 PM


I can see that you and your Mom have a very special bond.
I hope that she`s able to read this.
Thank you for sharing this peice of your heart.
Beautiful writing


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


CMGrimm
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
2 posted 2000-02-17 05:01 PM


Beautiful.  That's all I can say.  I only hope that somewhere, sometime, I should find a friend as faithful to me...

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
3 posted 2000-02-18 10:28 AM



Thankyou Wizzard and CMGrimm, yes I am very close to my Mom, I realize now what she has done for me, so I had to write this for her especially.  Thanks for taking the time to read my poem.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2000-02-20 10:29 AM


Melissa,
I never was given the chance by my mother to have this kind of relationship, but I think as she gets older she might realize that her kids need her as much as she needs us. I have to say though I do have a friendship like you write about with my mother inlaw I love her very much, thank you for your beautiful poem.

Cerenity-1

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