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In the Light of Love Above

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Marina
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0 posted 02-17-2000 03:50 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina


In the Light of Love Above


Flowers forever fragrant, dance in bloom
When Heavenís glittery gate opens
Birds beautiful harmony whistle their tune
In the light of love above


Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know
In picturesque soft meadows of time
Endless breezes of summerís show
In the light of love above


Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush
Colours radiant rainbow in June
Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush
In the light of love above


Marina Feb 16/2000


© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 02-17-2000 05:35 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

My gawd!  This is beautiful!  You make me feel like I've either died and gone to Heaven, or else, I've just fallen in love with Mr. Right.....geesh!   I would like to say a big Welcome, and I look very forward to reading more of your poems, for you have a wonderful way of using words beautifully!  
ill_tactics
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2 posted 02-17-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for ill_tactics   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ill_tactics

That was pretty, pretty excellent.  The words are very vivid, and well stated.  Made me feel calm and peaceful.  Nice work, keep the imagination flowing, and capture it on paper.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Marina
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3 posted 02-17-2000 06:40 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Poetfemme: thankyou very much.  Since the passing of my father I have often wondered what the world beyond is like.  I just glad I was able to express my vision in a way that is enjoyable to others as well.

But Mr. Right would be nice right about now too!

Ill-tactics:  I am glad you enjoyed it. However I'm usaully not so lucky in my images or flow.
Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 02-17-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I'm sure god reads poetry ... and I'm sure god would never change a word you have written here

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Marina
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5 posted 02-17-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Rex: Thank-you,if God does read poetry then he also must have a sense of humour.  Otherwise he would never allow me to post half of my stuff!
Julie
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6 posted 02-17-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Glorious! Excellent! If words had music this would be symphonic!
Marina
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7 posted 02-17-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Julie: Thank-you, but there is nothing which holds a melody like Mother Nature can.

Marina


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Marina
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8 posted 02-17-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Rex: I don't know about your end of Canada but, I would certainly appreciate it if God could take away some of this snow...in between poetry reading of course!!

Marina
Parker
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Marina, this poem is very nicely read. I agree with all the above comments.

Parker
Marina
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10 posted 02-18-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James: Thanks.  If there is a Heaven and Hell then I believe that living upon this earth is the test of hell and only you can choose your heaven when you reach " The Light of Love Above"
passing shadows
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how beautiful!
 
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