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devinmaria
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0 posted 02-17-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for devinmaria   Email devinmaria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit devinmaria's Home Page   View IP for devinmaria

did you look into me
and did you see my thoughts
did you stop to think about
the love for which i sought
did you open your arms
did you open your heart
but did you open your eyes
to see mine from the start
did you see the pain
the hurt that fills me so
did you stop the rain
or do you help it flow
did you see me, know me
before you said you loved me
did you feed your soul to me
or did you simply show me
can i turn around now
do i even want to try
can i shut the flood gates
of the love that is inside




 Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica
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1 posted 02-17-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

OHHHHH.....I like I like!  
Michael
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2 posted 02-17-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Powerful words...screams of betrayel of trust.  I wish I could tell you how to shut those floodgates, imfortunately I never could figure that one out myself.  Great poem, even still.


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My love still overflows with the floodgates closed....  Guess the love I have will never find the ocean that awaits.  I like this poem, its nice.  Let your pen guide you, cuz on paper is where the words of wisdom sit.  Much love, One love, PEACE
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