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Rod17WA
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since 2000-02-16
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0 posted 2000-02-17 01:13 PM


The pain I feel is endless,
my heart aches, my soul is dying,
I've lied, I've hurt everyone around me, even my own mother.

And all for a forbidden love,
for a forbidden life,
I wish things could be different,
and again I  hear you crying,

But even though I know its all wrong, I'm still striving,
I dont know where im gonna end up,
but I just hope one day You'll forgive me,
and understand, that I wont stop
untill the end...


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January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
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1 posted 2000-02-17 01:20 PM


That's certainly a different view point...
from the person who feels at fault,
but can't "stop" whatever it is he is doing,
even though he knows in his heart of it's damage.
Interesting indeed.
If only words of such could be spoken
at the right time,
to the right person.
Sigh.

SEA
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2 posted 2000-02-17 01:21 PM


Rod~ you shouldn't make your Mom cry........other than that, this was sad but written very well. -SEA
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