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CMGrimm
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0 posted 02-17-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CMGrimm

She Smiled....

A cute little hello smile, just smothered in shyness and hopefully attraction.


She smiled....

It started at the center of her mouth and turned upwards to form a perfect semi-circle of sweetness.


She smiled....

My heart fluttered as my eyes locked onto hers.


She smiled....

And my dumb-ass forgot to smile back!!!!

Christopher M. Grimm


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-17-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

LOL, great poem
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funny yuh to be sure but mite watch the cussin they strict round here o yuh
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ROFL
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Too Funny!   -SEA
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HAHAHA!
What a smile it must have been!
still, HAHAHA!
Michael
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Nothing warms me more than a sweet smile, CM.  Unfortunately I usually forget to smile back too...LOL  


Michael
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Thankyou you for that smile. I truely needed it today.  
CMGrimm
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8 posted 02-17-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Smiles are contagious aren't they.

Thanks everyone for reading and responding.

Chris
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ON the floor with Hoot! LOL! Damn! Don't we all have such missed opportunity stories!
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...and so - if she were to smile again - what would you do??? Just curious...
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A smile really does say a lot of things, doesn't it?  Perhaps, that particular smile rendered you speechless? : )
Liked it!
CMGrimm
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Thanks everyone for the sweet replies....you've all made my day.

Chris.

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Elizabeth Santos
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Great ending to an all too real situation
I like your style and I like to laugh
Liz
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cute
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