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Toerag
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Ala bam a


0 posted 02-17-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Toerag

Like a portrait by Picasso,
or a landscape by Van Gogh,
Like that famous chapel ceiling,
done by Michelangelo,
Like Botticelli's Venus,
emerging from the sea,
Like the smiling Mona Lisa,
You're like a case of Bud to me!
© Copyright 2000 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-17-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Intoxicating sentiment, to be sure.

Meadowmuse
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


2 posted 02-17-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL... who could ever ask for more??? LOL. I love it, sweetie... This case of Bud has shore missed yore sweet self!!!
Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 02-17-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Toe, I like your style, but I prefer Molson.
CMGrimm
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4 posted 02-17-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!

I love this.  

"You're like a case of Bud to me!"

That has to be the BEST description of love that I have ever heard.

Thanks for a good read.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


5 posted 02-17-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

put it in a love song put it in a looooove song....
Corinne
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6 posted 02-17-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Welcome back, my toe tied friend.

Sweet poem, too!  Bud?  Huh!  Like a case of Dom Perignon, my fair Don Juan.


Corinne
Fred Hobbs
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7 posted 02-17-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Good one Toe.  Please never send this to my wife, she'll be your's for sure.
Toerag
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Ala bam a


8 posted 02-17-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

But Corinne?...That high priced champagne had too many syllables...so does Molson and Fosters....and I could just hear Balladeer now.......thanks for the kind responses you talented folks....I see we have alotta new names?....
devina
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9 posted 02-17-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You NEVER cease to amaze me Mr. Toe!!!! I'm sure you've captured many a hearts with this one!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Corinne
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10 posted 02-17-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Good point, Toe, the syllables...the readers might not have known if you said:  Like a case of Dom, either!

This bud's for you, bud.


Cor


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SEA
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with you


11 posted 02-17-2000 11:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Toe, has anyone ever told you how romantic you are?!Cans or bottles honey?! -SEA
WhtDove
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12 posted 02-17-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Toe what excellent rhyme you come up with! LOL like a case of Bud...weis...er!  LOL

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Denise
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13 posted 02-17-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This one is classic Toe! Hillarious!

Denise
sweetcollege_girl
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14 posted 02-17-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

This poem suits you Toe, your wittiness, charm, and down right Funniness! lol

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


January Flowers
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15 posted 02-17-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

It's all in the perception, dear Toe!
ROFL
This is a certain smiler.
Nice to see your antics have arrived again.
Saxoness
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16 posted 02-17-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Oh, if only I could find a man to write ME such beautiful sentiments...   good job

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                      
                                 -Charles Brugnot



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Vincent VanGogh
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somewhere in France or Italy


17 posted 02-17-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for Vincent VanGogh   Email Vincent VanGogh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vincent VanGogh

Now you realize you have to share any beer you get for using my name in your pome...LOL

Vinny

Only someone I held true and dear,
Would I ever lend an ear.



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JamesMichael
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18 posted 02-17-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wonderful and expressive Toerag but the ending could use a little work.  May I suggest the last line...your sweeter than a case of bud to me.   James
Toerag
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Ala bam a


19 posted 02-17-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Actually gang, I'm getting better?..I used to say unrolling an ounce of Columbian reefer was like undressing a beautiful woman....Yassee? I'm doing much better.....it took 25 years, but I am improving?
suthern
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20 posted 02-17-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Improving on perfection, hunh? *G* Better watch out for that Vincent guy, sweets... that case will become a 6 pack in a hurry! LOL
Michael
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21 posted 02-17-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

How could you possibly get any better, Toe?

I already told you - you da man!

Michael
poetFemmeFatale
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22 posted 02-17-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

ROFLMAO...hehehe   You are too much 'ol Toe!  

I see you feel the same as I do at times....Love to me, is like....oh....er....never mind.  I am censoring myself here and now!  hehe  This rocks my heart!
Martie
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23 posted 02-17-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Toe, you are too cute!  Is that possible?
Nan
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24 posted 02-17-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Justin Kase a can might be'er work of art... Ever tried to build one o' them there pyramid sculptures out of 'em???

Lordy, they can git soooooo tall y've gotta step right on yer Toes ta reach....



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