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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 02-17-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Forgive Me

Forgive me
for my actions,
blindness,
and craziness.
Forgive me
for my delight,
energy,
and foolishness.
Forgive me
for my games,
haste,
and insecurities.
Forgive me
for my jestering,
kidding,
and laughter
Forgive me
for my misguidance,
negativity,
and oblivion.
Forgive me
for my pressure,
questions,
and recklessness.
Forgive me
for my sadness,
temper,
and uneasiness.
Forgive me
for my vengeance,
wastefulness,
and xenophobia.
Forgive me
for my yearning,
zounds,
and grant me peace.

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 02-17-2000 10:01 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i love the last lines these xyz poems are ketchy o yuh
Denise
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2 posted 02-17-2000 10:03 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great Gloria! We human beings are a real mess, aren't we! Thank God He is so forgiving!

Denise
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Very very clever  
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4 posted 02-18-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
This is just wonderful.
Acrostically-contained.
Not easy to do ... and done with feeling.
Great.
~*Marge*~


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Nan
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5 posted 02-19-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

My gosh, Gloria - You're all those things??? You must have some serious fun - I'm sure you're forgiven....
Parker
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and forgive me for loving this poem very much.

Parker
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Wayoutwalt: Thank You, I appreciat your reading and enjoying.

dsnyder: Thank You

Ruth: Thank You

Marge: Thank You, yes it did pose a challenge

Nan: Thank You, at one time or another not all together or I think I would be crazy...LOL

Haleyja: Thank You, your forgiven by me, glad you enjoyed it.
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Very, very clever, Dreamer! Most of the things you listed I call qualities, things which separate us from plants or trees....the essence of our personalities  
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Balladeer: Thank You
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