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I Danced

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-17-2000 08:15 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I Danced

I danced until the rainbow faded
failing to see the rain as it fell.

I danced feeling I was invincible
until the floor became unlevel.

I danced with illusions of mind
carefully crafted and played upon.

I danced a whole evening away
forgetting to research the stars.

I danced alone with myself
until realities light opened my eyes.

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mete out
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1 posted 02-17-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

Wow, that is beautiful.
The best form of escapism is that which needs no stimulent...just purity and beauty.

I can't wait to read more of your work.


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2 posted 02-17-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You just dance your little heart out, Nursie!
This is a beautiful poem!

Denise
 
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