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Where Do Lonely Hearts Go? (For Danny)

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christies heart
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25 posted 02-19-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart


Broken hearts do so much better when they have time to really mend by themseves before finding the hand of the new lover. Wonderful image and poem.
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26 posted 02-19-2000 06:11 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

That is exactly where this lonely heart would go
But I don't need to because I have you and the poetry you do
Very beautiful your poem Marge
Now write one where happy hearts go, how about it?


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27 posted 02-19-2000 08:42 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

A happy ending? Is it a begining as well?
I loved it. Beautiful!




 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
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28 posted 02-19-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nan~
You certainly have a great vantage point.
Keep the watch.

Chris G~
Your response rolls as gently as the waves.
Thank you kindly.

ChristiesHeart~
After floating alone on the sea
perhaps they return just in time
to be found by another.
Thanks for the read.

HelmutB~
Oh, my friend ... how you do challenge me.
Will post tonight ...
cause I know the answer.  

Glorfindel~
A new beginning indeed.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~




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Nice poem again.You do write nicely.
Marge Tindal
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VanDana~
Thank you so much.
~*Marge*~


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31 posted 10-09-2000 12:24 PM       View Profile for blackhalo   Email blackhalo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit blackhalo's Home Page   View IP for blackhalo

Marge,
Found this link in the Pub, decided to have a looksee.  This is beautiful.  I only wish that I could trust people enough to give out my heart once again, after it has been broken so many times.  But, I do find comfort in this.  Thank you.
Alicia
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Alicia~
Thanks for coming in to read it.
Not to sound Pollyanna-ish, but I believe
there is someone there to pick up the pieces.

Hope time proves me right for you.
~*Marge*~


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bestgirl911
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You were right, Marge, I did enjoy it very much and how ironic indeed...looks like we both have the same idea...of not giving up that is.....keep up the good work and I'll be keep enjoying...bestgirl911
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BestGirl~
Really glad you enjoyed it, as I enjoyed yours.
Yep ... appears great hearts think alike !
Thanks for coming in to read.
~*Marge*~



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