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The three final deaths of Love

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Glorfindel
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0 posted 02-17-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

The first is the death of the dream.
A dream of love, and love released,
a sweetness unequalled, unrivaled on earth,
no match in heaven for angel or god,
surely, there is none greater.

The next is the death of the hope.
A hope of a dream, a dream revived,
a reincarnation in sight, in mind,
a tortured hope, a hope in pain,
but a hope none-the-less.

The last is the death of the Heart.
It comes with the sight the awareness of death,
of decaying dreams and buried hopes,
In shock the coils, recoils in fear,
Will I ever dream again?



 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
© Copyright 2000 John Steemson - All Rights Reserved
mete out
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 02-17-2000 06:37 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

It sounds like you've been hurt. It is all to easy to be jaded and it is hard to recover from this mindset, but I feel confident that whatever your situation, it will become clear what you need to do.
Keep writing and keep surviving.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I se it.
infinat3 sadn3ss
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2 posted 02-17-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

i must have died years ago . fantastic .
binky_bec
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since 02-10-2000
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3 posted 02-17-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for binky_bec   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for binky_bec

this is such a unique and brave way to view shattered love. this is such a deep and truthful insight.....
very scary though...because it's something i never want to come across

bec
Glorfindel
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Auckland, New Zealand


4 posted 02-19-2000 08:32 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

Thank you you three, thats just what I was going for. Thanks.

Glorf.

 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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Victoria, Australia


5 posted 02-19-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Lovely poem although sad  HUGS tracie
devina
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Northern Cali


6 posted 02-20-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was a trip down memory lane for me m'friend!!! WELCOME!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Cerenity
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7 posted 02-20-2000 03:06 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi, Glorfindel

Three times for emphasis very nicely done, a very laden load for any soul may your journey be short.
WECOME TO PASSIONS

Cerenity-1
demoninlove
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since 02-11-2000
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8 posted 02-20-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for demoninlove   Email demoninlove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for demoninlove

You are mistaken - Love is eternal

 
 
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