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When you think you have it, but you don't

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tulip
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0 posted 02-17-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

Expectations
of dream like states
I see the dream
but miss the place.

I play the game
of give and take
but through it all
you've won the stakes.

I see the chance
we had before
But somehow, somewhere,
I closed the door.


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mete out
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1 posted 02-17-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This poem speaks volumes to me...I am constantly reaching out for something and letting my arm drop.
I look forward to reading more of you work.


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Thank you, Mete!
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Tulip-
You have that dreaded "closing door syndrome" too?
Enjoyed your poetic verse.
 
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