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A thousand miles

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Nikkisweet
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0 posted 02-17-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nikkisweet


The sun may not rise
The dark may not fall
But you will always
Be my All in all

The only thing that
Could keep me away from you
Is a thousand miles
Seperating us so very far

I could not walk
Nor swim or drive
For I'm just a kid
No way to get to you at all

So no matter how far apart we are
Even a thousand miles
I will always think of you
And hope you think of me too.

You're my future,my love, my life
So when I get older
A thousand miles
Will mean nothing to me.


© Copyright 2000 Nikkisweet - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 02-17-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

The rhythm kinda flounders around a little, but I choose to think you did that on purpose to show how love acts the same way. Right? RRIIIIIGGGHHHHT?   Another fun read.

M.
Nikkisweet
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2 posted 02-17-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nikkisweet

This is about my boyfriend I had for three years and he had to move a thousand miles away.
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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3 posted 02-18-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Nikki sweet poem, you wrote that straight from the heart I could tell. True love can overcome great distances...Hugs Tracie  
CMGrimm
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4 posted 02-18-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

A poem from the heart will always capture it's reader's heart Nikki...
You've captured mine here.   Wonderful read. One of the sweetest sentiments I've read in a long time.  Keep it up young pup, you've got alot of skill and PASSION in you, I can tell.

Thanks for the great read.


Chris.

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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5 posted 02-20-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi there sweetie,

True love sustains no matter what,it aslo keeps ones heart a float no matter the distance.
I liked this poem alot look forward to more of your work.

Cerenity-1
Parker
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6 posted 02-20-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Nikkisweet, I like alot, this work from your heart.

Parker
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