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The Dance

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spiked
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0 posted 02-17-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

I see you glide into the room
And my heartbeat changes
I suddenly feel excited and happy at once
I look into your gaze
And the light shines in your eyes,
Your light browns glimmer as I can see the outline of your contacts.
You smile at me and tell me not to stare at you
And I look away only to look back
Staring at you once again.
I look at your lips and they are slightly wet
I put my hand on the back of your neck and rub it as
I lean forward for a kiss.
You lean and our lips touch
They are warm and very soft.
I put my tongue just outside my lips
And touch your tongue.
You move across mine and
We kind of dance around each other.


A bit unconventional but thought it was interesting.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Nikkisweet
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1 posted 02-17-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nikkisweet

What a nice poem.  I really enjoyed reading it.  Good Job.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 02-17-2000 01:10 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Rich--unconventional IS interesting...isn't it?  Hmmm...more about this later, I think.
Or is that, "later than I think..."  
CMGrimm
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3 posted 02-17-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very nice spiked....very nice.


"I look into your gaze
And the light shines in your eyes,
Your light browns glimmer as I can see the outline of your contacts."

Now how deep of a stare is that?

Very good, very very good.


Chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
spiked
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4 posted 02-17-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you nikkisweet
Serenity what can I say You should know now how much i really love her.
Thanks Chris the stare was truely a stare of Adoration.
serenity blaze
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5 posted 02-17-2000 01:36 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I do understand.
Glorfindel
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6 posted 02-17-2000 06:11 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

hoo, man. All I can say is, you lucky sod, enjoy it while you got it.

 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
spiked
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7 posted 02-19-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks Glorfindel. Hopefully I can.
Rich
 
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