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spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-02-17 12:56 PM

I see you glide into the room
And my heartbeat changes
I suddenly feel excited and happy at once
I look into your gaze
And the light shines in your eyes,
Your light browns glimmer as I can see the outline of your contacts.
You smile at me and tell me not to stare at you
And I look away only to look back
Staring at you once again.
I look at your lips and they are slightly wet
I put my hand on the back of your neck and rub it as
I lean forward for a kiss.
You lean and our lips touch
They are warm and very soft.
I put my tongue just outside my lips
And touch your tongue.
You move across mine and
We kind of dance around each other.

A bit unconventional but thought it was interesting.

Nikkisweet
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

1 posted 2000-02-17 01:03 AM

What a nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Good Job.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-02-17 01:10 AM

Rich--unconventional IS interesting...isn't it? Hmmm...more about this later, I think.
Or is that, "later than I think..."

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

3 posted 2000-02-17 01:11 AM

Very nice spiked....very nice.

"I look into your gaze
And the light shines in your eyes,
Your light browns glimmer as I can see the outline of your contacts."

Now how deep of a stare is that?

Very good, very very good.

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2000-02-17 01:26 AM

Thank you nikkisweet
Serenity what can I say You should know now how much i really love her.
Thanks Chris the stare was truely a stare of Adoration.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-02-17 01:36 AM

I do understand.

Glorfindel
Junior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 22
Auckland, New Zealand

6 posted 2000-02-17 06:11 AM

hoo, man. All I can say is, you lucky sod, enjoy it while you got it.

Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2000-02-19 01:04 AM

Thanks Glorfindel. Hopefully I can.
Rich

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