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Dialogue (Just trying something different)

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CMGrimm
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Dialogue

You ask me, "Have you loved before?"
"Felt a feeling inside, that you just can't ignore"

I answer, "Never."

You ask me, "Have you opened your eyes?"
"To a love that's so great, you just can't disguise?"

I answer, "Never."

You ask me, "Have you ever felt needed?"
"Like your time was well spent, and should be repeated?"

I answer, "Never."
I'm thinking, "Before you."

To Renee.


Christopher M. Grimm


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spiked
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1 posted 02-17-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

I love the way you express your love for your wife in this. As she is the one and only you have loved. Great job
Rich
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This is lovely, Chris. So much said in this short conversation...thanks for sharing it here.

Nikkisweet
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How sweet.....
freckles
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Different obviously works for you, Chris.  I enjoyed the dialogue, both verbal and mental.

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mete out
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5 posted 02-18-2000 06:19 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This pooem is so beautiful and also very relavent to me as i have recently gotten engaged. your poem describes the emotins of my love perfectly...thanks for sharing.


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Chris Grimm~
This is a lovely departure.

"Have you ever felt needed?
Like your time was well spent,
and should be repeated?"

Now THAT is a wonderful thought process.
~*Marge*~


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Shelley
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This was very beautiful. Questions I think we all need to ask ourselves.
CMGrimm
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8 posted 02-18-2000 08:32 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks everyone for the sweet responses.

You've all made my day.


Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
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CMGrimm,

It,s nice to hear the love coming from this poem that is between the two of you, it is refreashing.


Cerenity
 
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