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~ A prayer of Unity~

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devina
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0 posted 02-16-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor-
And in return,
I ask thee for love.

A love so pure,
My own heart shall melt-
~A unity~ Devine,
That I may share in perfection.

Such perfection,
I claim not to be-
Yet my soul remains slave,
As it has chosen thee...

~To dwell in my eternity~


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Parker
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1 posted 02-16-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

devina, I loved this
~To dwell in my eternity~

very sweetly sincere.

Parker
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I love it Devina....

"By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor-
And in return,
I ask thee for love."

If I had read this a few months ago....
I would have tried to include that line
in my wedding vows.

Very very meaningful.


Chris

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This is beautiful, Devina! Simply beautiful!

Denise
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~Yet my soul remains slave,
As it has chosen thee...~

Beautiful...


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

tori
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5 posted 02-16-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Wow!!!   very nice piece here great job devina...

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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devina
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James- your sweetness must have rubbed off on me, eh???   Thank you much dear!!

Chris- I'm honored to know that you would have considered this in your wedding vows!!! I'm hoping one day to say them at mine!!!!

Denise, Breathe, and tori- my heart thanks you all for the "beautiful"!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Michael
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7 posted 02-17-2000 04:16 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

"By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor"

Dang that sure says a lot girl.  Powerful words right from the gate on this one.  You deserve love in return, too.  May it reach you soon.


Michael
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8 posted 02-17-2000 04:26 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

You have such a way with word`s that every time I read one of your writing`s my lil ole heart goes pitter patter
Thank`s once again for sharing your feeling`s Devina.
How true your signature is


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

devina
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9 posted 02-17-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Micheal- I was feeling a bit heavy when I wrote this...glad you can relate! I hope all is well with you!!!

Wizzard- I'm glad to know I get someone's heart going pitter-patter!! Thanks to you m'friend!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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10 posted 02-17-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is beautiful, devina... I like it very much!!  
Danny Holloway
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11 posted 02-17-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Lady, what can I say!  
You take sweet words and mold them like clay and inside our hearts they truly stay.
Where oh where do you get such inspiration!
Another triumph!
Danny
devina
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12 posted 02-17-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thank you suthern...a compliment from you is always sweet!!!

Danny- I can't honestly say where the inspiration comes from...dreams maybe???  


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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beautiful
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