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devina
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0 posted 2000-02-16 11:01 PM



By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor-
And in return,
I ask thee for love.

A love so pure,
My own heart shall melt-
~A unity~ Devine,
That I may share in perfection.

Such perfection,
I claim not to be-
Yet my soul remains slave,
As it has chosen thee...

~To dwell in my eternity~


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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Parker
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1 posted 2000-02-16 11:15 PM


devina, I loved this
~To dwell in my eternity~

very sweetly sincere.

Parker

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2 posted 2000-02-16 11:44 PM


I love it Devina....

"By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor-
And in return,
I ask thee for love."

If I had read this a few months ago....
I would have tried to include that line
in my wedding vows.

Very very meaningful.


Chris


Denise
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3 posted 2000-02-16 11:44 PM


This is beautiful, Devina! Simply beautiful!

Denise

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4 posted 2000-02-16 11:50 PM


~Yet my soul remains slave,
As it has chosen thee...~

Beautiful...


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...


tori
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5 posted 2000-02-16 11:55 PM


Wow!!!   very nice piece here great job devina...

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
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devina
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6 posted 2000-02-17 12:02 PM


James- your sweetness must have rubbed off on me, eh???   Thank you much dear!!

Chris- I'm honored to know that you would have considered this in your wedding vows!!! I'm hoping one day to say them at mine!!!!

Denise, Breathe, and tori- my heart thanks you all for the "beautiful"!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Michael
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7 posted 2000-02-17 04:16 AM


"By will of Fate,
I give thee my honor"

Dang that sure says a lot girl.  Powerful words right from the gate on this one.  You deserve love in return, too.  May it reach you soon.


Michael

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8 posted 2000-02-17 04:26 AM


You have such a way with word`s that every time I read one of your writing`s my lil ole heart goes pitter patter
Thank`s once again for sharing your feeling`s Devina.
How true your signature is


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


devina
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9 posted 2000-02-17 11:28 AM


Micheal- I was feeling a bit heavy when I wrote this...glad you can relate! I hope all is well with you!!!

Wizzard- I'm glad to know I get someone's heart going pitter-patter!! Thanks to you m'friend!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

suthern
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10 posted 2000-02-17 11:37 AM


This is beautiful, devina... I like it very much!!  
Danny Holloway
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11 posted 2000-02-17 11:44 AM


Lady, what can I say!  
You take sweet words and mold them like clay and inside our hearts they truly stay.
Where oh where do you get such inspiration!
Another triumph!
Danny

devina
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12 posted 2000-02-17 07:41 PM


Thank you suthern...a compliment from you is always sweet!!!

Danny- I can't honestly say where the inspiration comes from...dreams maybe???  


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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13 posted 2004-05-21 03:23 AM


beautiful
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