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A puff of air

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Seymour Tabin
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           A puff of air

Ever so gently moves the air.
Through limbs and branches waiting there.
A puff, a spill, in rhythmic flight,
Will dance the leaves to eyes delight.

There is more grace against the sky,
In silent play against the eye.
There is more poise that one can hear,
Then the rustle of movements near.

More fantasy to fill a dream,
Where nature plays upon the seem.
Just stand and listen to the birds,
Translate their little chirps to words.

And feel the gentle touch of there,
The symphony it plays in air.
There is no greater harp around.
There is no greater hear of sound.

Just pillow against the daffodil.
And open your mind and heart and will.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
January Flowers
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1 posted 02-16-2000 10:30 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Playing with my fettish for
transcendentalistic flair!
This is "fresh breath of air" lovely.
Enjoy reading someone slow down thought enough
to suck the simple, beautiful pleasure
out of nature.
Lovely.
Betty Gravitt
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2 posted 02-16-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Seymour... This brought me a little peace. Thank you.

 B Gravitt

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Thank you, Sy, for giving me the air  
Denise
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Ahhh, this makes me long even more for spring! Beautiful, Sy!  

Denise
CMGrimm
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SPRING!!...How many more days is it now??

To many for me to wait...thanks for the wonderful read.

Chris
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I, too, enjoyed this Seymour, and admire your profound gift for sharing so poetically the nuances of nature.
Elizabeth Santos
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Sy, This is so lovely, it brings a wanted peace to the soul. Your writing is extraordinary, always.
Love ya
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 02-17-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

January, Thank you so much, a wonderful comment.

Betty, Thank you, my pleasure Betty.

Balladeer, Any time Mike LOL

Denise, Thanks for the beautiful, beautiful.

CMGrimm, You welcome and thanks for the comment.

Meadow, There is no end to the nuances of nature. Thank you Meadow.

Elizabeth, You are so extravagant with your
wonderful explitives it makes me blush.
Thank you and love Sy

Toerag
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Sy, this was absolutely wonderful! (Though I thought is was gonna be about Balladeer's gastrointestinal problems while on dates), it was magnificent! You are one very talented dude my friend!
Martie
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Sometimes we forget in the hectic minutes flee
to stop, feel, listen and turn our senses into see

Thanks for the reminder in this lovely poem.
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 02-17-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Toe,
Why thank you, you old softy.

Martie,
What you say is true, but since you can't stop the world to get off, you might as well enjoy the flowers. *L*
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 02-17-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
What delightful phrases
you sent wafting on the wind.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 02-18-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
What delightful comments you send wafting o'er the air. *L*
 
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