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A puff of air
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A puff of air |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A puff of air Ever so gently moves the air. Through limbs and branches waiting there. A puff, a spill, in rhythmic flight, Will dance the leaves to eyes delight. There is more grace against the sky, In silent play against the eye. There is more poise that one can hear, Then the rustle of movements near. More fantasy to fill a dream, Where nature plays upon the seem. Just stand and listen to the birds, Translate their little chirps to words. And feel the gentle touch of there, The symphony it plays in air. There is no greater harp around. There is no greater hear of sound. Just pillow against the daffodil. And open your mind and heart and will. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Playing with my fettish for transcendentalistic flair! This is "fresh breath of air" lovely. Enjoy reading someone slow down thought enough to suck the simple, beautiful pleasure out of nature. Lovely. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Seymour... This brought me a little peace. Thank you. B Gravitt |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, Sy, for giving me the air  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhh, this makes me long even more for spring! Beautiful, Sy!  Denise |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
SPRING!!...How many more days is it now?? To many for me to wait...thanks for the wonderful read. Chris |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I, too, enjoyed this Seymour, and admire your profound gift for sharing so poetically the nuances of nature. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, This is so lovely, it brings a wanted peace to the soul. Your writing is extraordinary, always. Love ya Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
January, Thank you so much, a wonderful comment. Betty, Thank you, my pleasure Betty. Balladeer, Any time Mike LOL Denise, Thanks for the beautiful, beautiful. CMGrimm, You welcome and thanks for the comment. Meadow, There is no end to the nuances of nature. Thank you Meadow. Elizabeth, You are so extravagant with your wonderful explitives it makes me blush. Thank you and love Sy |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sy, this was absolutely wonderful! (Though I thought is was gonna be about Balladeer's gastrointestinal problems while on dates), it was magnificent! You are one very talented dude my friend! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes we forget in the hectic minutes flee to stop, feel, listen and turn our senses into see Thanks for the reminder in this lovely poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Why thank you, you old softy. Martie, What you say is true, but since you can't stop the world to get off, you might as well enjoy the flowers. *L* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ What delightful phrases you sent wafting on the wind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, What delightful comments you send wafting o'er the air. *L* |
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