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January Flowers
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0 posted 02-16-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for January Flowers

You took my hand and helped me see
the world as it blossomed reverently.
The raging wind once born within
has subsided now so valiantly.

The sun as it rises, the moon while at sleep,
are more lovely now, as your company I keep.
No worries I hide nor do I keep inside
the feelings I've found for you down deep.

For trust is the key to unlocking the door
of my heart, which I thought would know love no more.
The hollow, cold spaces and unfriendly places
inside me have changed without chore.

All things, my love, with you  are first sight.
'Tis the first time I've ever felt love feel so right.
I cherrish you now and I make this my vow
to be worth all the wait and the fight.

© Copyright 2000 Sherry Lampack - All Rights Reserved
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with you


1 posted 02-16-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JF~ this is wonderful!! I know just how this feels! Yay for you! -SEA
January Flowers
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2 posted 02-16-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Thank you SEA.
I remember well what this feels like, too,
and I was drawing from memories of the past.
Hopefully this feeling will land upon me
once again one day.
Still a lovely memory.
Glad you enjoyed!
Wizzard
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3 posted 02-16-2000 08:34 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Wow!!
He must be feeling quiet special after reading this or will after he`s read.
Very nice January
Thanx for sharing another peice of your heart.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

January Flowers
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4 posted 02-17-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Yes, just another piece
of a heart trying to surface.
Love the smiling memories!
Thanks, but he never did get it-
the poem.
But personally, is still a great remembrance.
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5 posted 02-18-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Wonderful work.  Very moving. It makes me want to write all the more.
Cerenity
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6 posted 02-20-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi January Flowers,

I love the name you chose and I love this poem. It feels so nice to have that feeling of security does'nt it. Every body needs to read this poem and remember that even though they are having problems now that does not mean they can not find true love in the furture. Would you not agree.

Thank you,
Cerenity-1
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 02-20-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Liked this piece, and especially admire how you've managed this challenging rhyme scheme...very nicely done. (o:
poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 02-20-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

You really *remember* beautifully!     Thank you for sharing, it brought back some warm memories of my own...I too, wait.  Enjoyed the rhyme scheme likewise!  Very nice...
January Flowers
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9 posted 02-21-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Thanks everyone!
It is nice to step "outside" current emotions
and recall what once made me so very complete.
I appreciate all of your inspiring replies!
HelmutB
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10 posted 02-21-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

How sweet the sound ringing in my ear
Your poem speaks words I like to hear
So sweetly done in such nice way
Thank you I just had to say

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

 
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