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Parker
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0 posted 2000-02-16 06:39 PM


Raven Hair
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A shimmer seen one mans dreams
the color of the night
the Raven Hair you dare to ware
is stunning to my sight

Brunettes will frown with blondes around
till auburn take the scene
but all will stare at Raven Hair
she enchants them like a queen.

James Parker Haley (c)1993


© Copyright 2000 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
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1 posted 2000-02-16 06:42 PM


love this....have always liked raven hair...lolol...and see(suthern) *gloating* here is a man who even writes about hair...lol...
(don't mind me and suthern, no she hasn't posted yet, but she will as soon as she sees its about hair, lol, its a joke she likes to tease me about....really she's just jealous of all my pretty dark hair)  
ROFG
oh....and if I didn't make it clear with all the chit chat....loved the poem

Corinne
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2 posted 2000-02-16 07:10 PM


Parkerrrrr,

a fickle one you are, with hair (and sand) your current craving,

first it was red, now of raven you are raving!

Tis said that you can't have your cake and eat it too,

So, which is it, my friend,

for next it will be blue!!!

VBG


Red

Parker
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3 posted 2000-02-16 07:18 PM


Ahh, Corinne. This is just a poem from my Raven series, that I did not post. Red is really my true rave these days. Ficklish I am not, ticklish maybe. Red rules.

Parker

Corazon, thank you very much.


suthern
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4 posted 2000-02-16 08:02 PM


But Corazon... he's admiring all that hair on her HEAD!!!! That "pretty dark hair" all over your body is another thing entirely! LOL

Oh, yes. Ahem. I had to harass that brat. Now I can admire your poem... it's a good one, Haleyja! *G*

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