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Marina
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Hand of Fate


Hands that ache, Heads that bow
Thoughts that hurt, Hearts that break
Shoulders barring a broken vow


Hands of guilt, Heads of shame
Thoughts of honour, Hearts of grace
Shoulders carrying unjust blame


Hand in hand, Heads in sync
Thoughts in rhythm, Heartís in love
Shoulders carrying a fused link

Marina Feb 14/2000

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Marina, Yes I like this format, its very thought provoking.

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James: Thankyou. I'm  curious as to what thoughts came to mind when you read this?

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Marina,
Interesting poem, well done.
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Seymour: thanks, It's not a very long poem but I hope people can see a message in it.

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