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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-16-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Glance

Glance at my glass
my smiling reflection
kisses your eyes.

Glance at my plate
blind of reflectiveness
it's duty just to hold.

Glance at my spoon
as it's warmth radiates
from coffee in it's cup.

Glance at my fork
the tines penetrating
the object of desire.

Glance at my knife
and watch as it cuts
delicately a pattern.

Glance at my napkin
as it falls gracefully
to the floor as I rise.

Glance at my feet
a journey abounds
if you care to follow.
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 02-16-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i do wish to follow where yuh goin ill listen to yuh spout verse as this
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 02-16-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nurse....this is truly a clever verse....from one nurse to another.....well done  
Martie
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3 posted 02-16-2000 05:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So many moments and things pass us by unless we look closely at how important they are.  What a journey!  Really liked this poem!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 02-16-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nurse,
A very unique invitation, enjoyed the read.
Well done.
Lady in Red
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5 posted 02-16-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

My dear Crachet, sitting here all by herself
Glancing around, feeling sorry for yourself ?
Let us have some fun and maybe a dance
I will follow your feet with my dazzling elegance
I hear there's a band playing right next door
Let's get those adorable feet off the floor
Maybe a tango, or perhaps a Cha Cha Cha
a little twist, or a tropical Salsa ?

Nurse Crachet
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6 posted 02-16-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Lady, your a little late
the parties already started
I've been dancing for hours,
why don't you come on over
and grab a partner
and dosido.LOL
Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 02-16-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Walt,know these feet could lead you astray.

Ruth: Thank You much.

Martie: Thank You, glad you enjoyed.

Seymour: Thank You

Denise
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8 posted 02-17-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so graceful and flowing, Nursie!! You are showing your true colors at last I see!!  Perhaps you're not such a meanie after all!!          

Denise
doreen peri
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9 posted 02-17-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

I very fine piece of writing! That's what I'm talking about! Excellent! Keep 'em coming! You writing is getting better and better!
 
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