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Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-02-16 10:37 AM

Glance

Glance at my glass
my smiling reflection
kisses your eyes.

Glance at my plate
blind of reflectiveness
it's duty just to hold.

Glance at my spoon
as it's warmth radiates
from coffee in it's cup.

Glance at my fork
the tines penetrating
the object of desire.

Glance at my knife
and watch as it cuts
delicately a pattern.

Glance at my napkin
as it falls gracefully
to the floor as I rise.

Glance at my feet
a journey abounds
if you care to follow.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2000-02-16 10:40 AM

i do wish to follow where yuh goin ill listen to yuh spout verse as this

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-02-16 10:51 AM

Nurse....this is truly a clever verse....from one nurse to another.....well done

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-02-16 05:48 PM

So many moments and things pass us by unless we look closely at how important they are. What a journey! Really liked this poem!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2000-02-16 05:59 PM

Nurse,
A very unique invitation, enjoyed the read.
Well done.

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 147

5 posted 2000-02-16 06:01 PM

My dear Crachet, sitting here all by herself
Glancing around, feeling sorry for yourself ?
Let us have some fun and maybe a dance
I will follow your feet with my dazzling elegance
I hear there's a band playing right next door
Let's get those adorable feet off the floor
Maybe a tango, or perhaps a Cha Cha Cha
a little twist, or a tropical Salsa ?

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

6 posted 2000-02-16 06:15 PM

Lady, your a little late
the parties already started
I've been dancing for hours,
why don't you come on over
and grab a partner
and dosido.LOL

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

7 posted 2000-02-16 06:28 PM

Walt,know these feet could lead you astray.

Ruth: Thank You much.

Martie: Thank You, glad you enjoyed.

Seymour: Thank You

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-02-17 08:54 PM

This is so graceful and flowing, Nursie!! You are showing your true colors at last I see!! Perhaps you're not such a meanie after all!!

Denise

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

9 posted 2000-02-17 09:29 PM

I very fine piece of writing! That's what I'm talking about! Excellent! Keep 'em coming! You writing is getting better and better!

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