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She Knocka Me Out

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 02-16-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

The angels colored the view
Breathing it in seemed so perfect
Then a woman mixed with the hue
She was impossible to neglect

The scenery couldn't be beautifuller
That would not be a word
And it couldn't be more beautiful
That would be absurd

For the angels colored the view
The very view she was blocking
But what was a poor guy to do
She was taking off her stockings

That's all there is to the poem I really don't know what happened next sniff…




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-16-2000).]
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 02-16-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

ROFL....good one walt  
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 02-16-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Walt, I'm sorry we need to hear more...LOL

This is great!
Corinne
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3 posted 02-16-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Women still wear stockings???

Yes, let's hear what comes next,Walt!

You have a dry wit, I can tell...

Corinne
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4 posted 02-16-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

She probably would knocka you out if she'd known you were watching! LOL. Or maybe she did? *G* I enjoyed this, Walt!!
devina
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5 posted 02-16-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I think we're all requesting a sequel to this one Walt!!! hehe

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6 posted 02-16-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You are a funny one, Walt! Thanks for the much needed laugh!!  

Denise

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7 posted 02-16-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

I love it! Great humor, two enthusiastic thumbs up!  

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Martie
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8 posted 02-16-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautifuller, is definately a word cause you just made it one and I like it.  Great poem!
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9 posted 02-16-2000 06:01 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

liked this....great poem!
wayoutwalt
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okokokokokok i shall come up with a sequel but please dont expect an empire strikes back  or a second godfather it'll prolly be more like a meatballs 2...
Nan
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11 posted 02-18-2000 07:57 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

*Tapping fingers & twiddling thumbs*.... not so patiently awaiting "Act Two"....
CMGrimm
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12 posted 02-18-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

LOL....that's great....

Chris


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13 posted 02-28-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

LOL, where is your mind Walt? Your silly side is something else.
Michael
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14 posted 02-28-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well I forgive you Walt.  If I was in your shoes, I'd probably stopped the poem there too.  LOL  


Michael

 
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