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A Well-Worn Smile

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Marge Tindal
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A Well-Worn Smile
~Marge Tindal~

I'll caress you with a verse
of love when it sighs.
Hug you with a look,
sent through green eyes.

Love you with a heart
that loves the love I'm in.
Send you a well-worn smile
that tells you where I've been.

Always I'll remember
the loves that I've known,
loves that have stayed
and loves that have gone.

Love that returns
time after time.
Love that belongs
in this heart of mine.





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 02-16-2000 09:48 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

That heart of yours
A wonderous prize
When viewed by all
Of our own eyes
A gift you have
And give so well
In tales of poetry
You tell
A caring heart
From which words flow
We need only read
And then we know

Absolutely beautiful poem  
Meadowmuse
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A well worn smile is a sight for sore eyes...lovely poem, Marge  

Claire
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3 posted 02-16-2000 10:30 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"Always I'll remember the loves I have known".  Wonderful line!  I doubt any of us forget the loves we have known.  So glad they were there, even though they didn't stay.  They helped mold us into the the kind of person we are, I believe.
Marge, you are so gracious and complimentary
of the work of others.  I have never met you but I know you heart; so big and pure.
Even though I may not reply to all you poems, know that I read each and every one.
Danny
Marge Tindal
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Hoot~
What a wonderful little poetic response.
Smiles are fun to see and fun to give.
Thank you for yours.

Claire~
I understand that.
May you give and get many well-worn smiles, my friend.

Danny~
My goodness, what with the way we are growing it would be difficult to reply to all.  But, I'm giving it the old college try.

Just knowing you read them is enough for me.  I'm glad you liked this one.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 02-16-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I know there is a candle in this heart of yours with my name on it.
Well done Marge , and sorry for this short reply, but I'm late and have to fly
So I call this the
"Loving fly by reply"
How is that?


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Breathe~
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You amaze me...Bravo!

That is all I have to say...I've quite simply run out of compliments...you have totally DEPLETED my supply!

Can I have a lock of hair?  *grin*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

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Simply beautiful, Marge!  

Denise
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Marge.... I love the word always...
"always I will remember" That one line touched me deeply. Thank you.


 B Gravitt

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Marge, this is wonderful, I can really relate to ....

Always I'll remember
the loves that I've known,
loves that have stayed
and loves that have gone.
--------------------------

this is me, for sure. and Loves that have gone.. yes thats me for sure. sigh!

Parker
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Helmut~
The candle in my heart burns brightly
for you my friend.
Love the 'fly-by'
bye-bye.

Breathe~
LOL !  I'm betting you haven't depleted
your supply !  Thank you, gal.
(L`Oreal Blonde)

Denise~
Amazing lady, you are.
Thank you for all the encouragement
you give all of us on our poetry.

Betty~
So nice to see you.  You've been missed
by this lady.  
Thank you, Betty~.  
I agree ... always and forever ....
love just fits with those words.
If I touched you ... I'm pleased.

Parker~
Funny man !
You are wonderful.
Thanks for the read.
~*Marge*~




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You've summed up my life with this one Marge...

so true, so true,
that which you speak
with simply a smile!!!!


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A heart like yours is hard to find
it has that warm touch of real mankind
reaching out to give a bear hug to everyone
and all the many other wonderous things you've done.
A smile than tops off your overflowing gifted personality
as you share with all here at Passions your beautiful sentimentality.
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13 posted 03-25-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"Loves you with a heart
That loves the love I'm in"

That's your favorite line, right, Marge? I know it is. We have a connection.....and it's mine.

Wonderful words......
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Marge, you, my friend will never run out of lovely love---you have a life time supply.  Wonderful poem!
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Little Devina~
Guess I just plumb didn't see your
reply in here.  You KNOW I wouldn't
overlook your sweet self intentionally.
You've got such a lovely smile !

LostDreamer~
Thank you sooooooo much for
your reply.
You've got me pegged right with
that SENTIMENTAL stuff. I plead guilty.
And I love it.
Just as I love you.
Aren't we all just a bunch of smiles !

My Balladeer~
Awww !  You're so sweet.
Of course you're right.
And of course you're in mine.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge
What a beautiful piece
I can't see your eyes, but I most certainly see your heart and know that it's just as beautiful as this poem you've written
LoL  
tracie


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Martie~
You just keep sneaking in ...
little shadow ... Love you with
a well-worn heart.

Tracie~
Trust me ... they are sparkling green
lit with specks of friendship.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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I have to agree with Balladeer - That's a wonderful line.... for an equally wonderful poem..
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Marge,

I see the years
and all the tears
etched between the lines
and all the love
from heaven above
kept safe for better times.

Thanx Marge!
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Justin Kace~
Why thank you so much.

INclan~
So much said in just a smile, huh?
Lovely response.
Thank you.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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I've been gone for a day or so, and have so much to catch up on~
Of course I always look for your poems first, Marge  
This is beautiful, as always~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard


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Mariee~
Thanks,hon.
Glad you're back.
Lots of wonderful poetry from everyone
in here for you to catch up on. WHEW !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,

Most unfortunate problem. I seem to be in the same place... can't forget a single thing.

 
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Lucky~
How nice to see your smiling face.
Glad you 'remember' to come here and
visit once in a while.
My love to you and Rosemary.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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