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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 2000-02-16 04:30 AM


I'm back
And with a vengeance!
I'm back,
I'm back-
Ready to attack!
I've been gone long,
But my will is strong
And I finally know where I belong.
I've survived and beat the reaper!
Guess you've got me- I'm a keeper!
That disease won't dig in deeper.
I am finally back!

I have returned
Now that I've learned
How to keep from getting burned
By evil hands and devils' flames.
But I won't stick around to play old games
Or call names.
Thought you got the best of me?
Well, you ain't seen my family tree
And all it's history!

Boo!
I Got You!
I Am Back!

Some of you were once esteemed
And I dreamed
Of having half that gleam.
But if shining means
To spoil within,
Gossip, name-call, or "un-befriend"
One, then
I don't want to win
At being like you.

And there are those of you
Who were true-
I thank all of you who
Stood by me while I lay blue
When no one asked you to.
Thank You!  

So, now you have it-
I am back
And with a vengeance!
Back and ready to attack
The hated forces that lack
Any quiddity.
Like an itch under your skin,
You'll find I made my way within
And you'll have to scratch way deep, down in
Until you bleed.
You'll not be freed
Of this One Voice and her creed!

Boo!
I Got You!
I Am Back!

©2000  Erin Solari




 ~onevoice~

"And Something's odd-within-
That person that I was-
And this One-do not feel the same-
Could it be Madness-this?"
Emily Dickinson


© Copyright 2000 ~one voice~ - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 2000-02-16 07:03 AM


Erin..
If you are in fact back, then I am pleased.  Of course, that would mean you have access to your own computer again.  It is very important that you contact me via ICQ and/or email - ASAP...
Thank you, and I pray all is well with you.

Nancy

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-02-16 07:06 AM


~OneVoice~
I for one, am glad you're back.
A hug for you.
Bless.
Real cute come-back, kiddo.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-02-16 08:21 AM


Welcome back! I like the strength you portray in your poem...but what's quiddity? LOL (Guess I'll have to reach for my dictionary! And since I see now that it rhymes with dictionary, I just may adopt the word!)        

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-16 09:50 AM


Erin...as you know, my thoughts and prayers have been with you. I'm glad to see you back and stronger than ever  
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-02-16 09:53 AM


Welocme back. I have only seen a few of your works but I am definately glad that you have returned and found your strength. I look forward to reading your work.  
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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6 posted 2000-02-16 09:59 AM


yuhyuhuyuhyuhuyuhuyuhuyuhyuhuhuyuhuyuhuyhuhuyuhuyuhuyhuhuyuhuyu infinity!! +1 even she's back she's back she's really really back o yuh!
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
7 posted 2000-02-16 11:09 AM


I have missed you Erin. So happy to see you again   Love the poem  

Jennifer

tori
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA
8 posted 2000-02-16 01:04 PM


Back in Voice.... but never far from ~Ones true heart of Friends..... You go gir...

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.
visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm

Corazon
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Posts 1209

9 posted 2000-02-16 01:12 PM


loved the spunk in this one....and what a way to say it....un-befriend....sigh...this says lots and lots bout friends and surviving...glad you survived  
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
10 posted 2000-02-16 03:09 PM


WOOHOO Girl!!  
Glad you're back!  You've been missed!

hugs hugs hugs!

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

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11 posted 2000-02-16 03:26 PM


I you are, Erin, this is wonderful news....and I love the spunk  
suthern
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12 posted 2000-02-16 03:48 PM


Welcome back, one voice!! It sounds as though times have been tough... but you have the victorious cry of a survivor! *S*
~one voice~
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Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
13 posted 2000-02-17 01:18 AM


Nan, Balladeer, I AM back!!!  Nan, I will be contacting you....

Everyone else:  I missed you too!  Thanks for your open arms!     I'm glad to be with you again!  

 ~onevoice~

"And Something's odd-within-
That person that I was-
And this One-do not feel the same-
Could it be Madness-this?"
Emily Dickinson


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