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bobbycat
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since 2000-02-06
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0 posted 2000-02-15 11:57 PM


(...just a little something I cooked up for my friend once when she was down in the dumps.   )


Never Stop Dreaming
********************

HEY!

Hey, you!
Yeah--
the one with the
hopeless heart an' no dreams!

Turn 'round--
look into that big mirror of life...
see that?
That there's your hopes an' your dreams!

Lookit that!
Sure are big, your dreams!
An' they's gettin'
bigger and bigger!
How about that...?!

Look!
They's gettin' away!

HEY!

Hey, you!
Go after 'em!
Chase 'em
an' run after 'em
'til they's yours again!

But this time, don't let go
an'
NEVER STOP DREAMING!

© Copyright 2000 Christina L. Petrosky - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
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1 posted 2000-02-16 12:03 PM


HEY!!

I like this bobbycat.  Very deep and meaningful yet fun at the same time.  great work.  I'll have to remember the advice in this and try to follow it myself.  Thanks.

Chris

Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
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2 posted 2000-02-16 12:14 PM


Awwwwww...totally inspirational!!!

*hugs YA*

Sorry...got carried away!  *grin*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...


bobbycat
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3 posted 2000-02-16 12:21 PM


Chris~ yeah, sometimes I have to remind MYSELF to take my own advice.      Thanks for replying.  

Breathe~ Thanks for the hug!!! Here's one back at ya'!  {{{ HUG }}}    

Bobbycat =^..^=

bsquirrel
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4 posted 2000-02-16 12:52 PM


Hey, don't tell me what to do!   Seriously though, a very enjoyable poem. It's so light, it's almost possible to miss the message (which is a good thing -- message-heavy poems are usually insufferable).

Mike

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5 posted 2000-02-16 07:38 AM


BobbyCat~
What a nice friend you are.
I like messages of encouragement
done for friends.
~*HUGS*~
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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