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Oh, So Gently
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Oh, So Gently |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Oh, So Gently ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ You held me gently in your arms flautist played our tune ~ day became night ~ the sun the moon ~ The stars and mars stared down from above I'm lost in the melody of you yet found within your love ~ Tenderly touching that which we know will blossom with the coming of the morning glow ~ Holding and folding me into you I'm born with love anew ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Beatiful peom....... |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, its wonderful when love can feel "anew" every time. Very lovely poem. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very beautiful Marge. I love your work you always make me feel so...well...utterly at awe....thanks. Chris. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No flautist could play our tune, Marge. It would take a whole orchestra!!!!!! Wonderful writing, as always.  |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Outstanding....you say so much with only a few words--what you do with the English language is incredible.  Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
awwwwww! this is sooo sweet!!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nikki~ Thank you. Gemini~ Everytime ... yes. Thank you. Chris~ I hope you know that I appreciate the fact that you enjoy what I write. I do. Maestro ! Balladeer  CONDUCT yourself accordingly ! BobbyCat~ Gosh, I'm glad you like what flows from my little inkwell. Thank you so much. ViXeN~ Thank you for liking it. Mike~ I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I really enjoyed this poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Thank you, hon. I liked it too. It just sang a pretty melody to me. So pleased you pulled it up to read. Again, my thanks. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious! |
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