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Oh, So Gently

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Marge Tindal
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Oh, So Gently
~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~
You held me gently
in your arms
flautist played
our tune
~
day
became
night
~
the sun
the moon
~
The stars
and mars
stared down
from above
I'm
lost in the
melody
of you
yet
found
within your
love
~
Tenderly touching
that which we know
will blossom with the coming
of the morning glow
~
Holding
and
folding
me
into you
I'm born
with love
anew
~*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Beatiful peom.......
Gemini
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Marge, its wonderful when love can feel "anew" every time.  Very lovely poem.
CMGrimm
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Very beautiful Marge.  I love your work you always make me feel so...well...utterly at awe....thanks.

Chris.
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No flautist could play our tune, Marge. It would take a whole orchestra!!!!!!

Wonderful writing, as always.  
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Outstanding....you say so much with only a few words--what you do with the English language is incredible.     

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
~ViXeN~
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awwwwww! this is sooo sweet!!!
Mike
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Beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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Nikki~
Thank you.

Gemini~
Everytime ... yes.  Thank you.

Chris~
I hope you know that I appreciate
the fact that you enjoy what I write.
I do.

Maestro ! Balladeer

CONDUCT yourself accordingly !

BobbyCat~
Gosh, I'm glad you like what flows from
my little inkwell.  Thank you so much.

ViXeN~
Thank you for liking it.

Mike~
I appreciate you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


vandana
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I really enjoyed this poem.
Marge Tindal
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VanDana~
Thank you, hon.
I liked it too.
It just sang a pretty melody to me.
So pleased you pulled it up to read.
Again, my thanks.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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precious!
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