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Listening |
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Jasmine New Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 6 |
"Listening" certain moments of the past clearly stick out in her mind frantically she searched his face for the love that she won't find she screams for anything for anyone but theres no one out there no one listening to her smokes too much, drinks coffee black she keeps waiting for someday she's losing hope, she's had enough she screams as she wastes away oh, please won't you be the one? take away her misery give her the only thing she wants let her know you're listening -Jasmine |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
This is so sad =( but well done! i hope this isnt you! |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Very nice poem. I was really touched about the girl you were writing about. Good Poem! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jasmine~ First let me welcome you to Passion's. GLAD YOU'RE HERE Next, nice entry you've penned. We all should learn how to ~LISTEN~ Thank you for the poetic reminder. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent writing, jasmine. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Jasmine, I wish you a warm welcome to passions. And congratulations on a very nice piece you've written here. Well done. I'll be hoping to read more from you in the future. Chris |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Good poem. Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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