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Listening

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Jasmine
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"Listening"


certain moments of the past
clearly stick out in her mind
frantically she searched his face
for the love that she won't find

she screams
for anything
for anyone
but theres no one out there
no one listening to her

smokes too much, drinks coffee black
she keeps waiting for someday
she's losing hope, she's had enough
she screams as she wastes away

oh, please
won't you be the one?
take away her misery
give her the only thing she wants
let her know you're listening

      
      -Jasmine
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~ViXeN~
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This is so sad =(
but well done!
i hope this isnt you!
Nikkisweet
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  Very nice poem.  I was really touched about the girl you were writing about.  Good Poem!
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Jasmine~
First let me welcome you to Passion's.

GLAD YOU'RE HERE

Next, nice entry you've penned.
We all should learn how to ~LISTEN~
Thank you for the poetic reminder.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 02-15-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent writing, jasmine.
CMGrimm
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Jasmine, I wish you a warm welcome to passions.  And congratulations on a very nice piece  you've written here.  Well done.

I'll be hoping to read more from you in the future.

Chris
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Welcome to the family! Good poem. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
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