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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-02-15 09:29 PM



They throw you
You catch'em
They fall
You pick'em

They'll listen
You talk
They tell
You cry

What happened?
They threw you
What happened?
You caught'em

You're playing this game again
Trying to be careful
Uh,oh the game starts to begain
You gotta be dareful

You caught'em
They throw you
You drop'em
You're careful

(This expresses what has happened to me in the past)

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bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

1 posted 2000-02-16 01:26 AM


I really enjoyed this poem. Heartfelt, with wisdom thrown in. Dammit, let's get some talk generating about your poems! Enough of this zero replies nonsense!  

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Mike

Nikkisweet
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
2 posted 2000-02-16 01:32 AM


My hero.......  
E-mail adress?

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2000-02-16 01:49 AM


If you want my e-mail address, just click on the appropriate icon, silly. And bring back Bill the Cat! No more beating hearts allowed!

Mike

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-02-17 04:40 AM


Nikki I read your poem and I thought you expressed your feelings very well..great poem   Tracie
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