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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-02-15 09:09 PM


Lost Dreamer's Partner In Rhyme

Lost Dreamer needed tummy rolling humor
so she deep sea fished an alias'
out from beneath a sheltered mind
Nurse Crachet became a partner in rhyme.

The Justin Stute needed order
so where better to get a tummy roller
then hanging round with Justin's in a corridor.

These Stutigan's gave her creativity
to reach a sillier side of reason
then Nurse Crachet ventured out the Stute
to find if life exists beyond these walls.

To her surprise the Passions world
was living their before her hazel eyes
Nurse Crachet posted a poem of Dance
that made her come to be alive
as Lost Dreamer's partner in Rhyme.

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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2000-02-15 09:37 PM


What a pair this duo makes
They have got just what it takes
Partners in rhyme, they claim to be
Writing words of poetry
I, for one, am glad to see
Nurse Crachet finally venture free
Beyond the walls she was confined
To write with Lost Dreamer, so refined
I hope that we'll be treated to
More pleasant rhyme from both these two
Alias or not, I say one thing
Lost Dreamer sure can make words sing  

Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 2000-02-15 09:51 PM


Ruth, I thank you so much for your words of confidence in my writing. Nurse Crachet is a fun part of me and she asked to become multi-dimensional so now she shall dance amongst the brilliance that graces this wonderful home we all have.
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-02-15 09:56 PM


She deserves to dance my friend  
Nan
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4 posted 2000-02-15 10:31 PM


Jeepers CRHYME-INY!!!
Dance away!!

Nurse Crachet
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5 posted 2000-02-16 08:38 AM


So I've been given the key to dance
and flirt around in fun romance.
Where do I start my fancy free
taste of this wonderous destiny.

Munda
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6 posted 2000-02-16 04:04 PM


Gloria, your rhyme is a delight to read, no matter which of your personality's you use. Thanks for the many smiles and all the fun  

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 02-16-2000).]

Denise
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7 posted 2000-02-17 08:43 PM


This is great Gloria!!  I think the two of you compliment each other very nicely!!

Denise

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