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And Then He Sent Me You (by Krystal, one of Nan's 8th graders)

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We have so much in common.
I know you are a gift
Sent down to me from God above
To give my life a lift.

Your kindness and compassion
Are truly genuine.
If I could have but just one friend,
I'm glad that you are mine.

I talk to you like no one else;
You always help me see
That God is always on my side,
And there he'll ever be.

Your friendship fills a void I have
And no one else will do.
God saw my need and smiled at me
And then he sent me you!!


Dedicated to Britt-Bratt
by Krystal






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-16-2000).]
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1 posted 02-15-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krystal~

What a lovely poem of friendship.
I'm sure Britt-Bratt loved it.
Keep writing and welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-15-2000).]
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What a lovely tribute!

Friendships mean so much... )


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3 posted 02-15-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Krystal, this is wonderful! A very nice tribute to friendship. Keep up the good work!  
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4 posted 02-15-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very nice Krystal.  It is wonderful to see young people interested in writing poetry.  I hope to read more from you in the future.

Chris
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5 posted 02-16-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Way to go, Kiddo!!!!
Of the two posted, I like this one best.. Wait till you see your next assignment...


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How beautifully worded....sounds like someone is very lucky to have a friend like you  
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7 posted 02-16-2000 09:56 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Krystal, you've expressed the blessing of friendship superbly! Very nice! Do keep writing and sharing!
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Great job Kyrstal. I am sure your friend will love it. It is a wonderful tribute to friendship.  
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Krystal,
  You've addressed two of the most important things in life.....God and friendship.  Britt-Bratt is lucky to have someone like you who recognizes the true value of friendship; no wonder God smiled on you.  I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.
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So young, so talented and so appreciative... This is very, very good writing.  You must appreciate your teacher as much as we do.  Keep up the good work, and share more with us.
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The frienship must be special as far as I can see
The poem in itself, well done has she
Precious as friendship so is your poem



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12 posted 02-16-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Love to see friendship valued
and rewarded with such a generous poetic offering!
This is great!
 
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