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And Then He Sent Me You (by Krystal, one of Nan's 8th graders)
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And Then He Sent Me You (by Krystal, one of Nan's 8th graders) |
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Class Member
since 1999-12-21
Posts 93In Poetry Class |
  We have so much in common. I know you are a gift Sent down to me from God above To give my life a lift. Your kindness and compassion Are truly genuine. If I could have but just one friend, I'm glad that you are mine. I talk to you like no one else; You always help me see That God is always on my side, And there he'll ever be. Your friendship fills a void I have And no one else will do. God saw my need and smiled at me And then he sent me you!! Dedicated to Britt-Bratt by Krystal [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krystal~ What a lovely poem of friendship. I'm sure Britt-Bratt loved it. Keep writing and welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-15-2000).] |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
What a lovely tribute! Friendships mean so much...  )Freedom of expression is the watch word... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Krystal, this is wonderful! A very nice tribute to friendship. Keep up the good work!  |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Very nice Krystal. It is wonderful to see young people interested in writing poetry. I hope to read more from you in the future. Chris |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Way to go, Kiddo!!!! Of the two posted, I like this one best.. Wait till you see your next assignment...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How beautifully worded....sounds like someone is very lucky to have a friend like you  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Krystal, you've expressed the blessing of friendship superbly! Very nice! Do keep writing and sharing! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Great job Kyrstal. I am sure your friend will love it. It is a wonderful tribute to friendship. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Krystal, You've addressed two of the most important things in life.....God and friendship. Britt-Bratt is lucky to have someone like you who recognizes the true value of friendship; no wonder God smiled on you. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
So young, so talented and so appreciative... This is very, very good writing. You must appreciate your teacher as much as we do. Keep up the good work, and share more with us. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
The frienship must be special as far as I can see The poem in itself, well done has she Precious as friendship so is your poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Love to see friendship valued and rewarded with such a generous poetic offering! This is great! |
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