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Why I Cry

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christies heart
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0 posted 02-15-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart


My heart explodes
like footprints on a vacant path,
when my yesterday collides with my now,
making you question my tears,
reject my pain.

Because I cannot paint
a portrait of my self-esteem,
laying in the pit of a snake's belly,
you believe that I am selfish,
jealous,
and wihout faith.


 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer

© Copyright 2000 Christine R - All Rights Reserved
firefly
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1 posted 02-15-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for firefly   Email firefly   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for firefly

To Christie// This was wonderful and sooo true. I can relate to the raw emotions. keep up the good work.
Wizzard
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2 posted 02-15-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Christies,
Anyone that can spread so much love around here in Passion,CAN`T be selfish.
How about you climb on my horse and we ride off into the sunset and put all our worries aside.

Just trying to Cheer ya up a lil.
Nice writing.Thank you for sharing

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

firefly
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3 posted 02-16-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for firefly   Email firefly   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for firefly

How have you been anyway Christie???


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firefly
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4 posted 02-16-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for firefly   Email firefly   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for firefly

hey...how come my icons didn't work???
christies heart
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5 posted 02-16-2000 09:27 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Firefly..I have been good MOM how about you? From your message I take it you knew a guy who liked to say "bloody hell too"

Wiz...Thanks so much for the sweet reply. I tried to submit this before. But did something wrong!!

Anyway, you did cheer me up!  
The last time I attempted to ride a horse anywhere I was 11 years old and it took off into the woods where I was lost for hours. Later, my "Dad" found me and was very angry that the prized horse was missing for so long. This is true..but was a good predictor for things to come as well.



 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer

hoot_owl_rn
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this is very powerful in its meaning
christies heart
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7 posted 02-17-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Hoot..thanks. I really wrote this years ago, but posted it now because its meaning revisited me the other day!
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good one
 
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