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I Should Have Know

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just_another_fe
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0 posted 02-15-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

THIS IS FREE FLOW OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD SORRY IF ITS NOT THE BEST  

I SHOULD HAVE KNOW
WHEN YOU FIRST TOLD ME
THAT YOU AND HER WERE OVER.
I WAS SO HAPPY
I COULN'T THINK STRAIGHT.
I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE "US" NOW
BUT
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.
IT WAS TO GOOD TO BE TRUE.
EVEN THOUGHT YOU SAID YOU LOVE ME
AND YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU.
I WAS SO HAPPY
I BELIEVED EVERYTHING YOU SAID
BUT
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN
WHEN YOU SAID ....
YOU WERE GOING THERE FOR "VACATION".
I WAS SO HAPPY
I THOUGHT
"THEY ARE JUST FRIENDS"
BUT
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN
THAT THERE WOULD NEVER BE
"YOU AND ME"
I WAS SO HAPPY
I WANTED TO BELIEVE
THIS TIME COULD BE
"YOU AND ME"
BUT
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.

I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN
BUT
I LOVED YOU WITH EVERYTHING I HAD.
I WANTED TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER.
I BELIEVED EVERYTHING YOU SAID.
I BELIEVED THAT YOU REALLY LOVED ME.
BUT
I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN.


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-15-2000).]
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sandgrain
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 3657
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1 posted 02-15-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

A sad song from a broken heart.  I'm so sorry you were betrayed.  Love certainly can be blind, sometimes reminds me of a little girl stumbling in glittering high heels, saying "They fit, they fit" in wishful thinking.  Be wiser, but don't distrust everyone.
Wizzard
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2 posted 02-15-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

You need to give yourself a little more credit.
I think you`ve done a heck of a job
If he`s not by your side,well that`s his loss.
A rose for a friend.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

just_another_fe
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3 posted 02-15-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

YOU GUYZ ARE THE BEST THANKS A LOT

SANDGRAIN: NICE COMPARISON I LIKED THAT. THANX  

WIZZ: THANKS FOR THE ROSE ILL BE SURE TO PUT IT IN A VASE   AND THANK YOU   I LOVE YOU AND I DONT EVEN KNOW YOU.
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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4 posted 02-15-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

When words flow from a heart, be it from a heart full of love and compassion, or a heart recently broken, those words have the ability to transcend all boundaries and reach deep into someone's soul.  You've done this here.  I sometimes think that people should just write as things come from the "top of their head" It gives us an opportunity to take a deeper look into a persons soul and personality.  Thank you for allowing us this deep into your life, for trusting us with your words.  

Chris
just_another_fe
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5 posted 02-15-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

CHRIS: THANX A LOT AND YOU ARE VERY RIGHT  
Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 02-15-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Hello ... I enjoyed this poem ... It's the first one of yours I've read but with this much talent ... I'll be reading more I'm sure

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!

just_another_fe
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7 posted 02-16-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

REX: THANK YOU VERY MUCH  
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-27-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lots of things to think about here.  I have wanted to love someone that wasn't really my destiny and no matter how hard you try they only want to be your friend.  Most of the time I know the very moment I meet someone if I am interested and exactly how far I would be willing to go with a relationship.  Be it get away from me, a friendship, a companion, a lover, or a desire for marriage.  So, now I know how I feel but I still need to know how they feel.
I know from lots of experience the answer is no, are you crazy,  maybe, let me get back to you, we'll see, lets start with a friendship, and sometimes yes.   And now we have a beginning if we have a yes because we are both willing to give some of our time to the other and now we can discover if our friendship will grow or disapear.   Sorry I went on so long.   Very nice poem and I don't blame you for wanting to give it a try.  We just need to know when to count our loses and move on looking for the right one for us !!!!!!!!!!
James
 
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