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Can You Dance With Me?

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-15-2000 03:12 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Can You Dance With Me

Can you dance with me
and float me away
to the moon
kissing the sun?

Can you dance with me
one on one
till I feel
the dew of morning?

Can you dance with me
one step at a time
till under our feet
the floor collapses?

Can you dance with me
like I'm your princess
and my gold slippers
are the key to our universe?

Can you dance with me
tonight for I'm free
to be whomever
you wish me to be?
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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1 posted 02-15-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

May I have this dance?  
Just kidding.  But really this is a very beautiful poem.  I really enjoyed reading it.  I'll be looking for more of you in the future.  Thanks.

Chris
Wizzard
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2 posted 02-15-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

A dancing nurse that`ll be who ever I want her to be.HHHMMmmmmmmm
I think I`ll take you just as you are    
Where do I sign up?
For the nurse of Passion
Thank you for sharing.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.





[This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-15-2000).]
Nurse Crachet
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3 posted 02-15-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I must confess
I'm an alias
escaping
from the Stute.

I am the one
they want
well done
so I've left
for greener
pastures.

If you know
not of the Stute
I am the brute
they will tell you.

For now I'm out
and venturing
about
with the sane
of Passions.

Thanks for your kind comments,
and Wizzard I love the rose
all the same.
Maybe you can come
visit at the stute
I know they'll drag
me back there,
cause they love me...LOL
Justin Nuendo
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Ozzz


4 posted 02-15-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Thank goodness, I got here Justin Thyme
Now she even started to rhyme !
ARGH, where’s the King when ya need him most !
She’ll soon turn these folks into ghosts !
Hey, what you’re dancing with ? LOL LOL LOL !!!!!!!!
That yar true love prince ? That’s a rubber doll !!!!!


Justin N  
Bashful
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5 posted 02-15-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Bashful   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bashful

Yo nursy dear!! *blushing deeply and digging my toes into the ground* You lookin for a priince charming to dance with ya? I'd love to dance with such a wonderful nursey. *swallowing the lump in my throat* PLLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE don't turn down little old Bashful.
Justin Kace
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6 posted 02-15-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Justin Kace   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justin Kace

Justin Kace you want to know
I have to tell you this
Since from the 'stute I saw you go
You're poems haven't missed

You're writing like you're Justin Tact
Not Justin Sayne at all
Good poem here, it's Justin Fact
Take pride in it - Stand tall...
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 02-15-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nurse Crachet.....it's wonderful to see you out of the stute, escape has done wonders for your literary expressions. Freedom is very becoming of you  
Martie
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8 posted 02-15-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Did they teach you to waltz in the stute, good nurse, or the texas two step is my suit.  I really like your dancing attitude, and this poem.
Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!


9 posted 02-15-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I'm blushing now,
you can't see
but I give my vow
for it's how
my mirror shows me.

Justin N: This Rubber doll I hold is yours
          from when you got him stuck
          inside your dripping wet drawers.

Bashful: How could I say no to you my friend
         I know you'll always stand beside me
         until the very sad and lonely end.

Justin Kace: Thank you for taking notice
             I'm glad you did not miss
             my new home in this palace.

Hoot_ Owl_ Rn: What a kind lady you are
               your words will take you far.
               Want to let loose in the bar?

Martie: Thank you, LOL teach us, I was head                    honcho and you can't
                   teach those old Justin's
                   new tricks, as for me
                   I'm learning now quickly.
doreen peri
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10 posted 02-16-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This is a wonderful poem. It uses imagery, simplicity, honesty, and romanticism ... a poem worthy of your real name, not your 'stute alias. Just thought I'd let you know that your writing is maturing and you have done a wonderful job with this one! Thanks for the read, m'friend.

-doreen  
Nurse Crachet
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11 posted 02-16-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Doreen, I thank you from the depths
        of my heart.
        Your high regards concerning
        my poetry are planted
        in my brain for further analysis.
        

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-16-2000).]
wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
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TEXAS (it's all big)


12 posted 02-16-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

as i stare longingly into the stute
wishing i could get in there
i heard a crazy story from a coot
that some one actually escaped i swear

why would anyone wanna leave the sanctity
of the stute its warm theres lotsa joking
and all the cheerios you could ever wish for
since the little holes keep from choking

who are the inmates who are the wardens
who who who who i sound like an owl
nurse cratchet dear security man
i saw her running east with a trowel

a dirty dirty for digging trowel
you say she is the only one ever been freed
thaz cuz its so warm in the stute
and the cheerios and comradrie we all need

so if her cell is free sweet guard
wont you find me a bowl o cheerios
and ill start penning unpleasant poetry
never again quite so seriose
Denise
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13 posted 02-16-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Nurse Cratchet! It has a lovely, magical air to it!  

Walt- Great poem too!  

Denise
Andrew Scott
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14 posted 02-16-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Nurse C my dear
It is my fear
That your dance card is full

If not, then when
May I cut in
Please dance with this here fool

I cut a rug
And jitter bug
Better than Fred Astair

I swing and sway
Tango, ballet
I can bop with real flair

Give me a chance
At just one dance
I'll show you who's the King

I'm not Elvis
But I've got his pelvis
And it's a marvelous thing
Nurse Crachet
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15 posted 02-16-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Yes Dear Andrew,

I do see the line it stretches very long
yet there are many hours, many song
that I can repeat and dance with you.
I left the stute with a distinct clue
to guide you swiftly on your way
instead you drove around town all day.

I gave you the first chance
to show me your side of romance
then you and Dr. Moose together
steal a car loaded in leather.
You came to rescue me from myself
but had more interest for what's on the shelf.

So here I came to dance
and since I got the chance
I threw off these spiked heels
and took to the floor to see how it feels.
Partner after partner danced so fine
so I guess you'll be next
when I reach the end of the line.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-16-2000).]
E.Fudd
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16 posted 02-16-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for E.Fudd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for E.Fudd

Why... Nurse C. , they're playing the "Acrostic Waltz"
one two three, one two three...


Institutionally speaking
While the floorboards are creaking
Only a fool could say no

Undeniably vibrant , as
Dogs to a hydrant
I'm drawn to your charms and must go

Everyone's talking
Despicably squawking
Embellishing what they don't know

Let idle tongues chatter
It doesn't matter
Good dancers are rare as green snow

Hope you've had fun , now
That this dance is done
Each step being taken real slow

Divinely you dance, glad that we had this chance
(for the others to put on this show)



[This message has been edited by E.Fudd (edited 02-16-2000).]
Parker
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17 posted 02-16-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Nurse Crachet, I really enjoyed this dance with you. I see have have been remis is missing your other poetry. A mistake I intend to correct.

Parker
Nurse Crachet
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18 posted 02-16-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Oh my,
it's getting steamy in here,
I need a drink, Bartender
Andrew Scott
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19 posted 02-16-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Says the Bartender:

I would love to serve drinks
But I'm runnin' with freaks
Andrew Scott and Doctor Moose

I hope to be there soon
With these two crazy loons
Cause they got the happy juice
Lady in Red
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20 posted 02-16-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Oh my goodness what a nice place this is !
Many dance partners, a Lady's bliss
I see Royalty over there from the Stute !
Hmmmm, he really looks very cute  
I see a resemblance with Elvis
Although I wonder if he can swing that pelvis  
Dear Crachet you took me to paradise
I think we will dance untill sunrise  

Anyone cares to dance ?
Andrew Scott
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21 posted 02-16-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

We made it! We made it!
Just a few bottles shy
WOW! Hey, check HER out Moose
Some candy for the eye

Say Lady In Red
Do you care to dance?
I've got Elvis' hip
And I'm one for romance

I do like your color
Red is my favorite
Reminds me of fire
And how hot things can get

I'm also a fine cook
I make the best 'Stute stew
It's like parafin gel
That just stick to you

So what do you say
Shall we dance this night?
Come melt with me
And burn in the light
Nurse Crachet
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22 posted 02-16-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Hello!!!!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-16-2000).]
Lady in Red
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23 posted 02-16-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Hmmm, a dance with you my dearest King
A slow dance, or do you rather swing ?
"It's now or never" my favourite song
And your arms seem just where I belong
Just tell me King, my crayon sweet
Are your feet made of royal concrete ?
I sometimes make a wrong step you know
And bruised in my life many a toe
But if you don't mind these little surprises
Let us dance, until the sun rises !
Andrew Scott
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24 posted 02-16-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady In Red I'll dance with you
There is no wrong your toes could do
I'll be your king if you my queen
Each royal step a perfect scene
We'll swing and sway, we'll dip and bend
To heaven above your feet I'll send
We'll dance on clouds within the sky
We'll make the stars shimmer and sigh

Nurse C will morn the chance she had
Stuck with the others... that's so sad

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 02-16-2000).]
 
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