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We Are One

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sweetcollege_girl
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0 posted 02-15-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

I will always remember
When our hearts came together
Of the time we spent in that place
We can truly say forever

I lie here thinking of you
And remember your gentle kiss
People think we're crazy
But it can't get better than this

We were two
But now we are one
Not wanting what we did
To ever be undone

Never to die
Those cold and lonely coals
We came together
Setting afire and combining our souls

stay cool all

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

© Copyright 2000 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-15-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"Never to die
Those cold and lonely coals
We came together
Setting afire and combining our souls"

Especially loved this part! great poem, Lavada!

Claire

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2 posted 02-15-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Beautiful poem Lavada, you make me jealous with your imagery, and your passion.
Thanks

Chris
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3 posted 02-15-2000 11:49 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

I like your style very much.Espically the last verse of the poem.keep it up.
sweetcollege_girl
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4 posted 02-15-2000 11:54 AM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

Thanks all...Kinda makes me feel better, knowing I have a family here... I'm going to start crying *sniff* Thanks again

cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

 
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