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A tragic love tale

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tracie66
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Love is wondrous deeply felt
Upon the stony path you knelt

Never did you utter a word
For if you did it was not heard

Your love was cold, she had no life
You had come to make her your wife

What you saw that fateful day
Was a lifeless figure, you began to pray

Pray your loved one was not this being
Pray that this was not what you were seeing

There was no breath or heartbeat found
your own heart to would no longer pound

For on that day your heart did break
and your own life you did take
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-15-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
Tears of sorrow fall for two.


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Dark Angel
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tracie, Wow very very sad. Well Done

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


tracie66
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While I was writing this I pictured that it was in maybe medieval times, I picture a knight kneeling by his beloved lady and you know the rest.  Thanks for your replies Marge and Dark Angel.. Tracie
 
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