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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-02-15 05:18 AM




Love is wondrous deeply felt
Upon the stony path you knelt

Never did you utter a word
For if you did it was not heard

Your love was cold, she had no life
You had come to make her your wife

What you saw that fateful day
Was a lifeless figure, you began to pray

Pray your loved one was not this being
Pray that this was not what you were seeing

There was no breath or heartbeat found
your own heart to would no longer pound

For on that day your heart did break
and your own life you did take

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-02-15 06:44 AM


Tracie~
Tears of sorrow fall for two.


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Dark Angel
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2 posted 2000-02-15 06:49 AM


tracie, Wow very very sad. Well Done

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



tracie66
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3 posted 2000-02-16 04:30 AM


While I was writing this I pictured that it was in maybe medieval times, I picture a knight kneeling by his beloved lady and you know the rest.  Thanks for your replies Marge and Dark Angel.. Tracie
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