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-DEE-
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since 10-29-1999
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SOUTH AFRICA


0 posted 02-15-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for -DEE-   Email -DEE-   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for -DEE-

A line or two I read
  to you;
do  you hear the life
  flow through?

Are these mere words -
or do they live;
do you feel the life
they give?

Do your heart and soul
cry out;
as words unfold and share
life's plight.

A line or two I read
to you;
do you hear the life
flow through?



 -DEE-

"We feel what we feel, 'cause we do what we do;
we do what we do, 'cause we feel what we feel"
© Copyright 2000 Delene Tracey Dunsmore, SA - All Rights Reserved
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 886
Hammond, La USA


1 posted 02-15-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

very beautiful dee
You seem to say so much in such a short time.
Thanks
Rich
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
Posts 700
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2 posted 02-15-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very very good Dee.   I love to read and hear poetry about why and how we write poetry.  This poem to me symbolizes a part of the very essence behind why I write.

"Do you hear the life
flow through?"

I have to ask myself that upon finishing any particular piece.  And if the answer is no...it's back to the keyboard to write and re-write some more.  

Thanks for sharing.

Chris.
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