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-DEE-
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since 10-29-1999
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SOUTH AFRICA


0 posted 02-15-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for -DEE-   Email -DEE-   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for -DEE-

If I, but one a mortal mere
could rid the world of
  each sad tear;
And lift the spirits, lift
the high;
And niether smile, nor warmth
  deny
The words I'd give would
  flow afree
and speak of loves
  pure destiny.....
  

© Copyright 2000 Delene Tracey Dunsmore, SA - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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since 02-09-2000
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1 posted 02-15-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Short But Sweet.
This say`s alot in such few word`s.
Thank you for sharing this writing and
Happy Valentine`s Day To You And Your`s


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

serenity blaze
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since 02-02-2000
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2 posted 02-15-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Exposing the heart of a "healer," thanx luv,
sincere and sweet.
spiked
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 886
Hammond, La USA


3 posted 02-15-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Very nicely done warming and holding. Can feel your arms around me now in comfort thanks.
Rich
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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4 posted 02-15-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very nice Dee.  very nice indeed.  I enjoy the shorter more heartfelt pieces sometimes much more than a lengthier storybook piece.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Chris
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Yes, there is much beauty in your brief words! I often prefer shorter poems, as well, simply because I find it difficult to focus for very long at a time. Wonderful sentiment, Dee. Thanks!

Claire
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