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Cupid's Arrow------>

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Nikkisweet
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since 02-14-2000
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0 posted 02-15-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nikkisweet

Oh,no I think i've been hit
I think it's cupid's arrow
Now I'm going to have a fit
Being in love is great
Its just ending it I hate
I love the feeling that I get
When you're about to kiss me
That day our lips first met
The warmth I felt when you first hugged me
That feeling I'll never forget
I'm in love and you're the only person
I want to see
Its been two months and
I hope you won't dump me.
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CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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1 posted 02-15-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Hey Nikki...I hope he don't dump you either....but if he does, gimmee a ring, my younger brother needs a date, his girl dumped him today.  (haha) Just kiddn'
very good work.  Be looking forward to reading more.

Thanks

Chris
devina
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2 posted 02-15-2000 02:55 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Very simple and to the point!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
tracie66
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3 posted 02-15-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A sweet little poem.....I hope you don't get dumped either...Tracie    
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