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Sunshine(please read)

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Nikkisweet
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0 posted 02-14-2000 11:52 PM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nikkisweet

Sunshine in my windows
Shining in my room
A smile on my face
The chirping of the birds

You feel like you're in heaven
Until the feeling stops
The sun is shining brighter
The birds are chirping louder

You're eyes are starting to hurt
You can barly see
The chirping is giving you an earache
Its harder for you to hear

So you shut your windows
No more shining there
The birds felt ignored
No more chirping there

You finally start to see
You're beging to hear
So you turn on some good music
And blow out your ear.

(I wrote this because you think things are good but then they get bad and you try and fix them and you just make them worse)
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Nikkisweet
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1 posted 02-15-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nikkisweet

That so describes me!
vandana
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2 posted 02-16-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

welcome to passions.enjoyed it.
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 02-16-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Not everything you try to fix can be, but when you don't try, you won't know.  So try anyway. It shows the kind of person you are.
Enjoyed your poem.
D
sandgrain
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4 posted 02-16-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Some things are just meant to be enjoyed as they are.....love the sounds of the birds and sunshine, but then I like good music,too, so guess it's a matter of what we're in the mood for.  Kinda sounds like you were down, when everything seems to bug us.
tracie66
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5 posted 02-17-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Nikki so true...nice poem Tracie
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