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Sunshine(please read) |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Sunshine in my windows Shining in my room A smile on my face The chirping of the birds You feel like you're in heaven Until the feeling stops The sun is shining brighter The birds are chirping louder You're eyes are starting to hurt You can barly see The chirping is giving you an earache Its harder for you to hear So you shut your windows No more shining there The birds felt ignored No more chirping there You finally start to see You're beging to hear So you turn on some good music And blow out your ear. (I wrote this because you think things are good but then they get bad and you try and fix them and you just make them worse) |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
That so describes me! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions.enjoyed it.  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Not everything you try to fix can be, but when you don't try, you won't know. So try anyway. It shows the kind of person you are. Enjoyed your poem. D |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Some things are just meant to be enjoyed as they are.....love the sounds of the birds and sunshine, but then I like good music,too, so guess it's a matter of what we're in the mood for. Kinda sounds like you were down, when everything seems to bug us. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Nikki so true...nice poem Tracie |
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