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Our Twilight Goodbye (Smile in the Sun) *For T.C.*

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Twilight_Angel
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0 posted 02-14-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Sometimes we all need something to hold on to
The kind of love we want to belong to
You're that energy that keeps me going
It's your smile that has mine glowing
You're my light when darkness swallows the sun
The air I breathe when pain chokes me and I can't run
The dream I live in when my life is gray
The sweet promises I believe in from the words you say
So if I wouldn't wake to see tomorrow
Don't drown in the waters of deep black sorrows
Because these words I want you to keep close to your heart
Whether its time that separates us or be death do us part...
Since the moment I gazed into your eyes
God cleansed me of dread, hate, and lies
For you were the closest to perfect anyone could come
And without you beside me my heart becomes numb
So my angel let it be from here on out
I will live only for you without a doubt
If our love fate must defy
And I find myself without you I'll look into the sky
I'll see your deep eyes in the heart of twilight
Shining sweetly as day turns to night
I'll feel your soft caress as the wind blows through the trees
Our one last kiss would dance in the breeze
I'd hear your laughter with the gentle river flow
Your voice so full of tenderness it never let me go
Then the angels would light the first star
As if to say our love is close though we're far
Then in the sun I'd see your smile
So full of love and mischief like a child's
And as you fade with the sun going fast
You are what I hold on to and I'll make our love last
How the night is so near
But I no longer have the fear
Because you are that light when darkness swallows the sun
You truly are my only one


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SEA
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1 posted 02-14-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

T_A~ This is wonderful.   So very loving! (my son goes by T.C.   )-SEA
Twilight_Angel
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2 posted 02-15-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Thank you SEA >) I hope more people will read and enjoy my poems.  This one is especially meaningful to me, I hope more people will post replies!  
Mike
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3 posted 02-15-2000 08:41 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Well done.  I enjoyed.
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 02-15-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is a wonderful poem of devotion, Twilight Angel...I especially love the line~

"Because you are that light when darkness swallows the sun"

Well expressed, keep writing!


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5 posted 04-17-2002 10:37 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

This was really beautiful. I loved the title and the images. Well done.

~sky

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