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Master
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0 posted 2000-02-14 10:00 PM


Love is a rose that grows unveiled
Love’s beautiful in all her forms
Love is the crown made of thorns
Love is a cross to which I’m nailed

Love is a rose that grows in vain
Love is the petals on the ground
Maturing paciently and proud--
A cross that dangles on my chain


© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 2000-02-14 10:12 PM


Very powerful words, master.  Good job.

Michael

Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-14 10:23 PM


I agree,Master. This is powerful and beautiful! Well done!

Denise

Master
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3 posted 2000-02-15 06:34 AM


Thank you very much, I wasn't sure about this one when I wrote it.
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4 posted 2000-02-15 06:37 AM


Master~
Doubt no more ... it's powerful.
~*Marge*~


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Meadowmuse
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5 posted 2000-02-15 09:41 AM


Simplistic and symbolic, crafted and  balanced very effectively. I like it!

Claire

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6 posted 2000-02-15 11:00 AM


Master...well done  
CMGrimm
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7 posted 2000-02-15 11:35 AM


Now I know why you are called Master.

Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the read.
Chris.

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