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Well Trained and House Broken

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Wizzard
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0 posted 02-14-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wizzard

WANTED:




Clean,Large,Loving Home
With plenty of room to play,
Someone that like`s to cuddle
And won`t use the word`s
Shut up,sit or stay,

You must have alot of patient`s
And promise not to yell,
If when I come in from playing,
I put off an unpleasant smell,

I can offer you all my love
A love that`ll never stray,
As long as you promise to feed me
Two or three time`s a day,

I`ll try to keep myself clean
And always stay by your side,
And when you want me to listen
I promise not to hide,

And all I`ll ask for in return
Is for some lovin everyday,
And let me get a dog
To protect you while Im away.



I know this poem has nothing to do with Valentine`s but,

Happy Valentine`s Day Passion




    



 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.



© Copyright 2000 Wizzard - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 02-15-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Im sorry but I couldn`t let this slip away without even one reply
So back for one more try.


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

devina
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2 posted 02-15-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is very cute!!!! I think the only reason no one is replying to this is because Ron asked all passion members to please limit our replies today due to the rush of Valentines visitors looking for poems.  Just give this one till tomorrow...too cute to resist!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
tracie66
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3 posted 02-15-2000 03:09 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Ah wiz great poem but somehow I thought it might end the way it did...Loved it! Tracie(mommy)tee hee  
christies heart
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4 posted 02-15-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Very cute. I could see this one going on and on. Add children to the mix!  
Wizzard
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5 posted 02-15-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Devina,
ooops..That would explane why the post were moving so slow last night.
Thank you for reading and replying

Tracie,
That predictable huh?
Thank for reading and the reply (mommy)  

C.H.,
Add kid`s or puppies?lol
Thank you for readin and replyin

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 02-15-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Where do I apply  
CMGrimm
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7 posted 02-15-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Great Wizard. Very cute.  You brought a smile to my morning.

Chris
jascanvey
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8 posted 02-15-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Aw lovely Wizzard!!
SEA
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with you


9 posted 02-15-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Wizzard~ very adorable! This is sweet! -SEA
Wizzard
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10 posted 02-15-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Hoot,
You already have

CMG,
any time I can give someone a smile,I can smile myself Thank you.

Jascanvey,
Thank you for reading and replying

Sea,
aaawwww shuck`s
thank you for your kind reply.

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 02-15-2000 02:37 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I enjoyed! *G*
Wizzard
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12 posted 02-15-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Thanx for reading and your reply Suthern Im glad you liked

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

Meadowmuse
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13 posted 02-15-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse


Wizzard, how could anyone resist??  

Precious poem, and swell presentation!
Good Boy! Good Boy!
Wizzard
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14 posted 02-15-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

LOL,Good Boy is ok,just as long as your not saying "shut up,sit or stay"  
Thank you Meadowmuse,Im glad you dropped in to read.
Thank You


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

Nurse Crachet
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15 posted 02-15-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

If you can dance
come to the Corner Pub...LOL
This here nurse
is looking for a partner.
No perfect one's
come through the door yet...LOL

Loved your poem,
hope you find
your Valentine.
freckles
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since 02-12-2000
Posts 161
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16 posted 02-15-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for freckles   Email freckles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for freckles

Awww Wizzard, I can't imagine anyone being able to resist that; I absolutely loved it!

[This message has been edited by freckles (edited 02-15-2000).]
Munda
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Posts 3629
The Hague, The Netherlands


17 posted 02-15-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I loved this Wizzard !     And I don't have a dog yet.....where's the application form ?  
Wizzard
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18 posted 02-15-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Nurse,Im sorry but I don`t know where the
corner pub is.
Kiddin
Thank you for reading and your kind reply

Freckles,Thank you as well,Im glad that you liked this

And Munda,
As for your app. well you don`t need one
Thank you for reading and your kind reply


 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

Gemini
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Posts 1223
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19 posted 02-15-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

A very charming piece, I enjoyed it very much.  
PhaerieChild
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20 posted 02-16-2000 02:14 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Wizzard, very cute! Brought a smile to this old face and believe you me it was needed. Thanks for the grins.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


faith
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21 posted 02-16-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for faith   Email faith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for faith

Hey W that wwas cuute faith
hoot_owl_rn
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22 posted 02-16-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*looks to make sure she filled out the application properly, would hate to be turned down on a technicality, wonders what the adoption fees consist of  *

Wizzard
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23 posted 02-16-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

Gemini,
Thank you for reading and your kind reply      

WildChild,
Any time that I can make someone smile,I can smile myself.
Thank you for replying      

Faith,
thank you for your kind reply.Im glad that you liked      

Hoot_owl,
For you,all fees have been waved.
I can see from your writing`s that you are a sweet,gentle young lady and one who would provide a loving home for this lil puppy      

just_another_fe
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24 posted 02-16-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

LOL THANK FOR THE SMILE WIZZ. ITS GREAT  
 
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