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Big Brother (For always I will wonder of how it could have been)
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Big Brother (For always I will wonder of how it could have been) |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Big Brother You were born long before me I never have known thee You lived not even a full year I miss you, wanting you were near You did not had a destiny I wonder how it would be You did not spoke a sound Then they put you into holly ground Life for you did never unwind You left nothing here behind No bones are left your grave is gone A Blackbird sings a lonely song I can’t remember you at all Before I was born you followed his call Someday we will meet up there I’m sure I find you anywhere Perhaps you came back to us as me To calm her, to comfort thee Although I don’t know Someday on a cloud you will show Show me your face that I miss so much Never did I felt your loving touch A face that I have never read For this, my Big brother I’m so sad I remember you today I love you. Is all what I wanted to say I’m sure I'll meet you some day Dedicated to “Harald” my Big brother who died not even one, and who I never have met. Born 1949, died 1950 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Helmut, this one definitely tugs at the heartstrings. Few things are more powerful than brotherly love, even when you didn't have the chance to know him...You shared the same family, the same cells, the same blood....and that's enough. Very powerful feelings here... |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This is very touching and so sad. To love someone that much without every meeting them is incredible. I'm sure some day you will meet him. Shell |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut- This is the most heart-rendering, touching poem I've ever read. Bless your heart. Knowing how much I love my big brother, I can't imagine never having known him. Believing, as I do, in the fact that we are too powerful an entity to just disappear, I really can relate to your lines- 'Perhaps you came back to us as me To calm her, to comfort thee' What a perfectly beautiful thought to hold. I just love your heart, Helmut Becker. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
Helmut, Very heart felt writing. I know that he`s saving a place Beside him in Heaven just for you. Thank`s for sharing this piece of your heart and God Bless.  < !signature-->Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. [This message has been edited by Wizzard (edited 02-14-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Helmut, I'm so glad you decided to share this one here tonight. You know how I feel about it. It is poignantly written, and tells much about your heart's pain and strength and your capacity for love. ((((you)))) L. and S. P. Claire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Helmut- this is devestatingly beautiful!!! I wish I were there to give a hug...as you always do...I send one through the screen!!! Keep your faith dear, and one day you'll be reunited, as will we all! I'm sure he's smiling down on you right now, for all that you've accomplished in this lifetime...you're a great man...always remember that he'd be proud!!! HUGS to you m'friend...and know that I'm here for you always!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Balladeer Thank you for your thoughts and the sharing of heart. Shelley I do miss him, Thank you for reading the poem. Marge Tindal As I love your heart, Marge. Thank you dear Wizzard Thank you, I hope one day I will get to know him. Perhaps I already do. I just don't know. Meadowmuse Claire, Thank you for your sweet words. I'm glad that you like this poem. ((((you)))) L. and S. P. Helmut devina I'll take a hug from you through the screen at any time. I hope he is smilling as much as I do. My thoughs are with you and Amber Thank you Hugs for you always too The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Helmut, this is really beautiful, I can certainly relate to this and your loss, I was born a twin, but my twin sister was Still Born. And like you I ache for her as you ache for your brother. I know he is with you as I know my sister is with me. *hugs* What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
My dear friend, what a wonderful tribute to your brother you never knew. Thank you so much for sharing your pain and loss with us. This is so sad and yet speaks of hope of reuniting...nicely stated my friend. Love and Hugs  Ruth |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So sad and so beautiful, Helmut!! You honor your brother with this tribute... well done! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Dark Angel Thank you, I'm glad you liked the poem. But I also feel for you as I know to well how you feel. Shared pain is half the pain. A bug Hug for you. Ruth Thank you dear for your feelings shown. Hugs and Love to you Suthern Also a hug for you, I'm glad you liked this piece The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helmut, I too was moved by these words. Perhaps he did come back as you--what a wonderous thought, no? I know he would have loved the sweetness that is in his little brother. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Helmut - this is so sad and touching...thanks for sharing this here. K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
sniff, wipe! Helmut this was touching and sad! You know you shall meet again and be together. God bless you! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Marti Thank you for your kind words Severn You are welcome, glad that you liked it WhtDove Here take a tissue, thank you so much for your sweet words, God bless you too The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sehr gut, Helmut... No doubt your brother know your feelings for him... You've said it beautifully here.. God Bless..  Nancy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm sorry Helmut. This is a wonderful poem to show your feelings and your love for your brother Harald. James |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Helmut-Your brother will always be with you as long as you keep him in your heart. I believe that he is with you now because there is no way that one man can have as much talent as you. I had the pleasure of seeing some of your art on your web page and now your poetry. Im left speachless. You are a true artist. Take care. Thank`s for bringing this one up for all to read James. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Thank you all for your supporting words and feelings. Nancy and James Thank you, RufffRyder thank you for your words about my art, perhaps you right. It sure would be nice. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Helmut, very moving poem. My heart is with you. |
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