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A Valentine

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 02-14-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A Valentine

I've breathed the essence of the man you are
The sweetest and most loving scent by far
A fragrance so enriching and sublime
My every breath is in this Valentine

My tongue in thirst has tasted of its goal
And sipped from out the wellspring of your soul
Savoring a purity so fine
Now from my well I send this Valentine

My lips have garnered kisses for your claim
That every moment whisper out your name
Bewitched am I by wonder of its chime
I send a kiss within this Valentine

My mind engraved a vision of your face
The inner eye has held it in embrace
A portrait of a countenance divine
My joy is mirrored in this Valentine

So here's a kiss, a whisper, an embrace
My breath, my soul, my vision of your face
This is the message of a Valentine
It means that I am yours and you are mine

So let me celebrate our love this way
I wish for you a Happy Valentines Day

Elizabeth Santos


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-14-2000).]
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Dark Angel
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1 posted 02-14-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ellizabeth, how very beautiful this is.
straight from the heart.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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2 posted 02-14-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

All I can see is the love you feel
I'm sure he knows your love is real
Such beautiful piece you have created Liz
Very very sweet
A Happy Valentine comes your way from me


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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3 posted 02-14-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lovely, Liz.
Beauty in the face of love.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 02-14-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Gee, Elizabeth, and I didn't get you anything!!! Well, I accept this beautiful poem, anyway. Thank you!!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 02-14-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
This valentine is a work of art.
And it has surely melted my heart.
So I will save the liquid to make a toast.
If ever we meet and I be the host.
Love Sy
Denise
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6 posted 02-14-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Elizabeth! Your love for each other shines through in this!!

Denise
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This one speaks clearly of your heart Liz...I do hope you gave it to him, what a wonderful gift  
ESP
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8 posted 04-28-2000 05:53 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This poem is so full of love.....what a wonderful gift to him...did ya give it? Another work of art!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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