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The Cycle

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CMGrimm
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0 posted 02-14-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CMGrimm

The Cycle

Soft sunset
gentle breeze
I say to you
"Love Me Please"

Whispering silence
quiet pain
I'll wait for you
Come back again

Stinging words
Painful things
Take me away
Please, give me wings

Emotions,
Love's most wonderful way
To let you know
I love you, today.


C.M. Grimm




 
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CMGrimm
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1 posted 02-14-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Hello everyone...I truly hope you enjoy my poetry.  This is my first post so I am really nervous about everyones perception of me and my writing.  I've been writing for about 10 years now but this is the first time I've ever opted to publicly display my work.  Please feel free to post your ideas and suggestions. Or contact me by e-mail to maybe offer helpful hints and ideas to improve my works.  Thank you.  CMG
Ted Reynolds
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2 posted 02-14-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

This is a very sweet first entry, and you're starting out fine.  Let me be the first to welcome you, and assure you that you have nothing to worry about
CMGrimm
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3 posted 02-14-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks Ted for your enthusiasm and uplifting words...Im reading through lots of other poets work right now and trying to learn as much as I can about everyone here.  I hope to become an active part of this forum community and hope to be able to participate in as much as possible.  Thank You.  cmg
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 02-14-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I agree...a very sweet and thoughtful poem. I extend my hand in welcome, CMG, and am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Take care,
Claire
CMGrimm
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5 posted 02-14-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thank you Meadowmuse.  It is very nice to be so openly welcome to express my feelings and my work.  I hope to be able to spend ample time on here to get to konw everyone.

Thank You
Chris
January Flowers
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6 posted 02-14-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

CMG-
WELCOME ABOARD!
This place is like no other
and you'll lack in sleep for a few weeks
(at least)
And as for getting to know everyone through their writings:
HAHAHA!
So many character traits
which are ever changing with the seconds.
Keeps it interesting.
Great entrance with this writing
and again
WELCOME!
JF
CMGrimm
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7 posted 02-14-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thank You JF for your welcome.  Again, I thank everyone for welcoming me and my poetry.  I don't have much experience with poetry posts or with HTML but I am studying hard at them both...at least as hard as I can anyway.(HAHA).  I hope to hear more form each of you as time passes.  

Thank You.

Chris
Eloise
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8 posted 02-14-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Hi Chris, welcome to Passions.    I'm sure you will enjoy your stay with us.  I enjoyed this read very much, it was sad and very well expressed.  I especially liked the first stanza.  Look forward to reading more of your work.  So don't be shy!  
Poet deVine
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9 posted 02-14-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! This is a lovely first poem! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!  
HelmutB
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10 posted 02-14-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Such a good and heartfelt poem
Well done, and welcome to passions
Also your web site is very good
I'm sure to read more you inked

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 02-14-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

A nice heartfelt poem I can relate to...welcome to passions  
CMGrimm
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12 posted 02-15-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thank you everyone for the special welcome to Passions.  I appreciate the heartfelt response I'm getting here from my writing.
I hope to be able to communicate with each and every one of you in the near future, to share poetry and ideas.  Again, thanks everyone.
Chris
spiked
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13 posted 02-15-2000 01:33 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

welcome to passions chris this is very good so honest. Well done.
Rich
CMGrimm
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14 posted 02-15-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks again spiked for the kind comments.

Chris
devina
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15 posted 02-15-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is simple and very heartfelt...WELCOME with open arms m'friend!!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Ted Reynolds
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16 posted 02-15-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Ted Reynolds   Email Ted Reynolds   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ted Reynolds

And Chris, you don't have to respond to thank everyone for every comment.  If you do that, you'll have little time to write new poems, and we all understand that.  So read our poems, comment as you feel like it, and post some more for us . . . and you don't have to answer this.
tracie66
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17 posted 02-16-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Chris don't be shy this was a great first entry, WELCOME TO PASSIONS as you've already guessed everyone is very welcoming and encouraging... This place is a great place to be once again welcome from Tracie P.S hope to read more of your work.
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