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My One And Only Love (Acrostic Valentine for my Wife)

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 02-14-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

My love, my life, my wife
You are all this and more
One heart, one soul, one whole
Now and for evermore

Element of my bliss
Answer to all I dream
Nirvana in your kiss
Desire met supreme

Only you can there be
Nestled within my heart
Love for eternity
Yours from the very start

Love sowed by you and I
Ours from the past we share
Voucher for the future
Evermore in your care

© Copyright 2000 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-14-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is the epitome of sweetness and devotion...such a love you must have!

Claire
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2 posted 02-14-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

She sure must be special
A very nice poem you created for her
Thank you for letting us see this

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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Absolutely beautiful Scott....she's one lucky woman  
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 02-14-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Scott,
Well done, I enjoyed the poem.
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 02-14-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Andrew-
This is lovely.
It should just melt a gal's heart.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 02-14-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Sir Andrew, your devotion to your wife and family has always been a true inspiration. You are indeed a great man.
Denise
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7 posted 02-14-2000 10:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh Andrew, this is so beautiful! I'm sure she'll love it!  

Denise
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 02-15-2000 12:10 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Thank you, one and all for your kindness.  Indeed she loved the poem to the point of tears.  Your words here are icing on the cake.  Hope you all had good a Valentine's Day.
CMGrimm
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Very good read Andrew....I had to print this one out to show my wife.  (Of course I will receive a ribbing for it..."Why can't you be sweet like that??"  She has a real way with words she does.)

Thanks anyhow.

Chris
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Such sweet
Oncoming emotion

Surley she loved it
Why wouldn't she?
Everything about the poem
Everything is her
Truly a great poem

an acrostic for you  

stay cool Andrew

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Andrew Scott
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CMGrimm: I am flatterd that you would do so... should you receive any grief, reminder her that some men wouldn't even take the time to find such beauty... and that its kind of like giving her flowers... you didn't grow them but they're a symbol of your love just the same.   Peace!

Sweetcollege Girl... Very cool right back at cha... and thanks for the acrostic.
Martie
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12 posted 02-15-2000 04:58 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautiful sweet devotion in words.  Lovely!
Beki
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Sweet and impressive, both an acrostic and rhymed. Well done!
Andrew Scott
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14 posted 02-16-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Martie and Beki... thank you for looking in and for your kind words. My best to you both.
Wizzard
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15 posted 02-16-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

My love, my life, my wife
You are all this and more
One heart, one soul, one whole
Now and for evermore......
Them four lines alone show both your devotion and the love that you have for your wife.
The two of you are very lucky to have each other.
I hope that she was able to read this?
Thank`s for sharing this Andrew

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

 
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