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And Thank God

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Sunshine
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Today I will take the hand
of a very special man
as I have in the past
as I will in the future

and put it gently to my heart
so he can feel the heat
of life, and love
that is his, forever.

And Thank God.



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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1 posted 02-14-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

A big Amen!


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Thank you Michael!
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3 posted 02-14-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Bravo!  Nice Valentine's Day post!
Danny
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Thank you, Danny!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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5 posted 02-14-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

You said it short, but you said it well
Happy Valentine I say here to wish you well
Very nice

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Sometimes, it is enough, Helmut.  Thank you.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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7 posted 02-14-2000 04:40 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very well put.  Happy Valentine's Day.  And warm wishes from here to there.  cmg
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Thank you, CMG, and Welcome to Passions!
Kelly
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9 posted 03-05-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Short and sweet....I love it.
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10 posted 03-05-2000 08:08 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How did I miss this one? It's lovely  
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Glad Hoot found this
It's wonderful
Liz
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12 posted 03-05-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Sunshine!  

Denise
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I wonder how I could have missed this poem too?  It is so very touching and beautifully expressed.  Applause!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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14 posted 03-05-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This expresses such a wonderful feeling in just a few words..love can do that..
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15 posted 03-05-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine, Bravo and well done. *L*
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I missed this too ...  
Quite beautiful Sun ....
Said so much with so few words !!!
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17 posted 03-06-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Thank you all very much for "rediscovering" this little piece - it works for any day, when you have the right soul mate.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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THAT IS SOOOOOOOOO SWEET!
I will save it for when I have that special person in my life too!
Great writing!

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January, that you would "save" this little piece for that special someone tells me a lot.  Thank you for commenting.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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