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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-02-14 02:24 PM


Today I will take the hand
of a very special man
as I have in the past
as I will in the future

and put it gently to my heart
so he can feel the heat
of life, and love
that is his, forever.

And Thank God.



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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Michael
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1 posted 2000-02-14 02:36 PM


A big Amen!


Michael

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2 posted 2000-02-14 02:40 PM


Thank you Michael!
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3 posted 2000-02-14 02:57 PM


Bravo!  Nice Valentine's Day post!
Danny

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4 posted 2000-02-14 03:09 PM


Thank you, Danny!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


HelmutB
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5 posted 2000-02-14 04:34 PM


You said it short, but you said it well
Happy Valentine I say here to wish you well
Very nice

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-02-14 04:37 PM


Sometimes, it is enough, Helmut.  Thank you.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


CMGrimm
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7 posted 2000-02-14 04:40 PM


Very well put.  Happy Valentine's Day.  And warm wishes from here to there.  cmg
Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-02-14 04:42 PM


Thank you, CMG, and Welcome to Passions!
Kelly
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9 posted 2000-03-05 01:23 AM


Short and sweet....I love it.
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 2000-03-05 08:08 AM


How did I miss this one? It's lovely  
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2000-03-05 08:19 AM


Glad Hoot found this
It's wonderful
Liz

Denise
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12 posted 2000-03-05 10:32 AM


This is beautiful, Sunshine!  

Denise

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13 posted 2000-03-05 10:39 AM




I wonder how I could have missed this poem too?  It is so very touching and beautifully expressed.  Applause!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Martie
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14 posted 2000-03-05 10:58 AM


This expresses such a wonderful feeling in just a few words..love can do that..
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15 posted 2000-03-05 11:03 AM


Sunshine, Bravo and well done. *L*
Pepper
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16 posted 2000-03-05 12:26 PM


I missed this too ...  
Quite beautiful Sun ....
Said so much with so few words !!!

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17 posted 2000-03-06 11:01 AM


Thank you all very much for "rediscovering" this little piece - it works for any day, when you have the right soul mate.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


January Flowers
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18 posted 2000-03-06 09:01 PM


THAT IS SOOOOOOOOO SWEET!
I will save it for when I have that special person in my life too!
Great writing!


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19 posted 2000-03-07 08:40 AM


January, that you would "save" this little piece for that special someone tells me a lot.  Thank you for commenting.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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