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Melody of My Heart #3

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Sven
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0 posted 02-14-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Melody of my heart, song of my life
I am here now to help guide you toward the light.
You have taken the first steps out of that night so black
Towards a brand new life, there's no turning back.

Take my hand my love, I know the way
The way to a bright, shining, brand-new day.
A day where our love shines brighter than the sun
A day where our hearts can finally be one

I know that you're scared, I am too
But know that through it all that I love you
Melody of my heart, song of my life
Welcome my love, to your new life.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 02-14-2000 01:49 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

I know one word that she`ll have for this one Sven.

SWEET



The two of you are very lucky to have each other as such dear friend`s.

Happy Valentine`s Day To Both Of You



 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 02-14-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

So endearing and full of devotion, Sven...very nice!

Claire
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3 posted 02-14-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is really sweet Sven...I shall hear the melody of your heart for always...tis a beautiful sound yah know??  

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Isis
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4 posted 02-15-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Beautiful Sven, hope you both had as happy a Valentine's day as you could.  (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


CMGrimm
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5 posted 02-15-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Beautiful Sven.  very sweet.   My wife is yelling at me.."Why can't you be more like Sven!!!"   Haha...anyway, good work.

Chris
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Sven you just made my heart skip a thousand beats what a beautiful poem, she is so lucky to have you. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO BOTH OF YOU even though it is the day after. Tracie

Sven
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7 posted 02-15-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all my friends. . .

Wizzard. . . wow, what a reply!  Thank you very much.

Meadowmuse. . . I hope that it shows.

Devina. . .yes, it is a beautiful sound, one that I have not heard for many years.

Isis. . .yes we did. . . hopefully next year we'll be together. . .

CM. . . don't try to be like me. . . just be yourself. . . I'm sure your wife will like that much better.

Tracie. . .thank you so much. . .it's nice to know that my writing can make people happy. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

kaile
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8 posted 07-25-2000 03:56 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

Sweet's the word...Sven..this was a pleasure to read and i hope you two will have lots more Happy Valentine's Day together
Sunshine
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