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Sven
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0 posted 2000-02-14 01:20 PM


Melody of my heart, song of my life
I am here now to help guide you toward the light.
You have taken the first steps out of that night so black
Towards a brand new life, there's no turning back.

Take my hand my love, I know the way
The way to a bright, shining, brand-new day.
A day where our love shines brighter than the sun
A day where our hearts can finally be one

I know that you're scared, I am too
But know that through it all that I love you
Melody of my heart, song of my life
Welcome my love, to your new life.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
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1 posted 2000-02-14 01:49 PM


I know one word that she`ll have for this one Sven.

SWEET



The two of you are very lucky to have each other as such dear friend`s.

Happy Valentine`s Day To Both Of You



 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-02-14 01:54 PM


So endearing and full of devotion, Sven...very nice!

Claire

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Cali
3 posted 2000-02-14 01:55 PM


This is really sweet Sven...I shall hear the melody of your heart for always...tis a beautiful sound yah know??  

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Isis
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4 posted 2000-02-15 01:04 AM


Beautiful Sven, hope you both had as happy a Valentine's day as you could.  (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



CMGrimm
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5 posted 2000-02-15 01:13 AM


Beautiful Sven.  very sweet.   My wife is yelling at me.."Why can't you be more like Sven!!!"   Haha...anyway, good work.

Chris

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-02-15 03:15 AM


Sven you just made my heart skip a thousand beats what a beautiful poem, she is so lucky to have you. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO BOTH OF YOU even though it is the day after. Tracie


Sven
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7 posted 2000-02-15 12:55 PM


Thank you all my friends. . .

Wizzard. . . wow, what a reply!  Thank you very much.

Meadowmuse. . . I hope that it shows.

Devina. . .yes, it is a beautiful sound, one that I have not heard for many years.

Isis. . .yes we did. . . hopefully next year we'll be together. . .

CM. . . don't try to be like me. . . just be yourself. . . I'm sure your wife will like that much better.

Tracie. . .thank you so much. . .it's nice to know that my writing can make people happy. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


kaile
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8 posted 2000-07-25 03:56 AM


Sweet's the word...Sven..this was a pleasure to read and i hope you two will have lots more Happy Valentine's Day together
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-09-19 05:41 PM


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